Question

请英文高手帮我纠正一下英文部分的翻译错误

中文部分：
其实我本来午餐是已经准备好了的，但是当同事提议去吃披萨的时候，我还是忍不住跟去了。这次点的是地狱厨房和意大利腊肠双拼披萨，配上冰可乐非常的好吃，另外还值得一提的是他们家的薯条，也非常的棒。
其实披萨是我比较喜欢的快餐之一。记得对于披萨的第一印象来自于动画片《忍者神龟》，外卖披萨送到的时候。里面的角色总是会显得很满足开心。第一次吃披萨实在徐家汇的一家知名的连锁餐厅。但是对于当时披萨的味道已经不怎么记得了，只记得非常的贵。

英文部分：
Actually I was ready something for lunch, but when my colleague suggested goes to pizza restaurant, I couldn't help joining. We ordered a two sorts pizza which with Hell's Kitchen pizza and Pepperoni Pizza. Eating this with cold coke is perfect. And French fries in this restaurant are also very good.
Pizza is one of my favorer fast food. My first impression about pizza is from the cartoon named "Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles". The heroes in it always looked very happy when they received pizza. My first pizza experience was in a famous restaurant chains in Xu Jia Hui. But I can't remember the taste about that pizza, only remember the price was very expensive at that time.

Answer 1

前面的都比原作好很多了，语法错误已经基本没有了，语言什么的我再稍微改了改

Actually I had already prepared something for lunch, but when my colleague suggested pizza, I couldn't help joining. We ordered a two-sort pizza, Hell's Kitchen and Pepperoni, which is really delicious along with ice coke. And French fries in this restaurant are also very good.

Pizza is one of my favorite. My first impression about pizza is from a cartoon named "Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles". The heroes in it always look very happy when they received a pizza. My first pizza experience was a famous restaurant chains in Xu Jia Hui. But all i remember now is its marvelous price instead of the exact taste of that pizza.

Answer 2

Actually I was ready something for lunch, but when my colleague suggested pizza restaurant, I couldn't help joining. We ordered a two-sort pizza, Hell's Kitchen and Pepperoni. What a perfect match with cold coke. And French fries in this restaurant was also very good.
Pizza is one of my favorite. My first impression about pizza is from a cartoon named "Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles". The heroes in it always looked very happy when they received pizza. My first pizza experience was a famous restaurant chains in Xu Jia Hui. But what i remember now is ONLY its marvelous price.

Answer 3

Actually I was ready something for lunch, but when my colleague suggested going to the pizza restaurant, I couldn't help joining. We ordered two sorts of pizza -- Hell's Kitchen pizza and Pepperoni Pizza. Eating them with cold coke is perfect. And French fries in this restaurant are also very good.
Pizza is one of my favorate fast foods. My first impression on pizza is from the cartoon named "Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles". The heroes in it always looked very happy when they received pizza. My first pizza experience was in a famous restaurant chains in Xu Jia Hui. But I can't remember the taste about that pizza, and only remember the price was very expensive at that time.