Question

求英语大神帮我检查下这个句子的语法对不对。。

Dear Lynn Huang:
I’ very pleased to receive your letter. I think that have regular meetings on Wednesday is pretty good.
PS: What time shall we start meeting? This Wednesday or next Wednesday?

Answer 1

坦白的说，英语为母语的认可以看懂，如果是口语表达式OK的，同理如果是短信用语是可以的。如果作为email或者书面语，可以调整一下。尤其是2nd那句，歧义很大。我对其的理解是你认为周三作为经常见面的时间比较好，而不是周三比较好是吧？我按照我的理解改写一下你的信，如不介意可参考一下：
Dear Lynn Huang:
It is my pleasure to receive your letter(如果你们地位相同的话，直接用Thank you for your letter. 就好). It is fine that we book the regular meetings(你是指common meeting吧？) on Wednesday.(如果你觉得Wednesday不是你心中的首选但可接受的话；如果是很喜欢那个时间可参看下句) I think we will enjoy our regular meetings on Wednesday.
PS: Which day is you prefer to open the first page of our meeting, this Wednesday or the next one?
Best regards.

此外，对于meeting可以替换一下，如果是正式会面推荐用conference，如果是目的性谈话推荐用convention，如果是闲聊推荐用chat，当然meeting不算错，只是不怎么被native speaker使用而已。
还有一个建议，如果你的regular meetings 不只一个周三要有的话，推荐将2nd那句的on Wednesday 改成 on futher Wednesdays 。

Answer 2

有错误 I think that have regular meetings on Wednesday is pretty good.that引导的宾语从句差主语，所以讲have改为having，用动名词作从句的主语。
What time shall we start meeting这句差冠词，在meeting前加上the
第一句是i‘m而不是i’

Answer 3

Dear Lynn Huang:
(I’ 是 I'm) very pleased to (receive 改为 have revieved) your letter. I think that (have 改为 having) regular meetings on Wednesday is (pretty good 改为 a good idea).
PS: What time shall we start (加 our) meeting(s)? This Wednesday or next Wednesday?

已替你更正了，希望会对你有助。

Answer 4

第一句不太正确。i' m very pleased to receive your letter. i think that having regular meetings on wednesday is pretty good .
when shall we start the meeting, this wednesday or next wednesday?

Answer 5

that后引导宾语从句，主语不可省。start meeting 可意为开始见面，可在meeting 前加上the,