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请英语专业人士帮我看下--翻译的对不对

我们想在中国开设多家carpisa的连锁店,我们非常有兴趣想和你们谈中国代理权,我们现在在南京已有3家店,都是销售皮包,布包,等,有多年销售经验,不知你们可以告之相关信息,如:宣传,存货,进货价格,装修规格,年出款式数量,物流配送,
你们的加盟流程是怎样的.是否有整体行销企划规划,等.
我们可以到你们在中国的生产厂参观?
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翻译者 A
We plan to open a few Carpisa chain stores in China. We are very interested in discussing with you about the dealership. We have already had 3 stores in Nanjing, all selling various kinds of bags such as portfolio and packs, etc. We have years of experience in sales. Would you please tell us more information like the promotion, stocks, purchase price, fitment standard, number of designs per year and dispatch?
What are the prosedures of joining you? Do you have a whole marketing plan?
Can we visit your company in China?

翻译者B
1. We would like to open chain shops of carpisa in China.We are interested in being your agent of China if it is possible.
We have had three shops which is selling leather handbags and so on in Nanjing.What's more,we have a lot of experiences during practicing and selling several years.Could you send us information such as propagation, stock,price of imports and decoration,quantity of exports and so on.
2. May we know your procedure if we want to be your agent.Is there complete and mature plan?
3. Could we visit your factory of productions in China?

以上翻译是我找两个人翻译的!请专业人士帮我看下哪个人翻译正确.并给出评价,如果有感觉不对的地方请帮我翻译一下!谢谢

Answer 1

We want in China to set up several chain stores of carpisas, we have interest to think very much to talk a Chinese agency with you, we have already had 3 stores in the Nanking now, all is sell a wallet, the cloth wraps, etc., there are several years to sell experience, don't know you can tell of related information, such as:publicity, stock, enter price of goods space, repair specification, year style amount, the logistics goes together with to send,
You become number of process what kind of.Whether there is whole marketing programming, wait.
Can we go to you to visit in the production factory of China?
自己对这看吧

Answer 2

We would like to set up in China more than carpisa chain stores, we are very interested and you want to talk about China proxy, we are now in Nanjing has three stores are selling handbags, cloth, etc., have many years of sales experience, I wonder if you divisions can be related information, such as: advocacy, inventory, purchase price, decoration specifications, models, a number of logistics and distribution,
You join what is the process. Whether there is a whole marketing plan planning, and so on.
We can come to you in China's manufacturing plant tour?

Answer 3

应该是B啊