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Anne Frank is a Jewish girl. She lived inAmsterdam in the Netherlands. She was passed away at the age of 16 in theconcentration camp. Only 16years old! Her family was Jewish so they had to hide. If they didn’t hide, they will be caught by the German Nazis. She and her family being hide away since July 1942, and they hide in a very small room for more two years until they were discovered by German Nazis Party. Anne wants a friend whom she can tell anything to “her”. So she choose her diary as her best friend. She calls her best friend Kitty.

Answer 1

She and her family being hide away since July 1942注意be动词的问题，这里应该是一个过去完成时吧，应该是She and her family had hide away since July 1942，第二，and they hide in a very small room for more two years，for more two years可改为more than two yeas.第三，Anne wants a friend whom she can tell anything to “her”. want的时态错了 ，是过去时。还有whom引导的从句，这里你已经有了her作为句子的宾语，所以整个从句不缺少任何成分，可将whom改为that。第四，So she choose her diary as her best friend. She calls her best friend Kitty.还是谓语动词时态问题，应该用过去式

Answer 2

你的时态怎么变来变去的

这是个过去的事情吧，尽量用过去式

an fr was

they would have been caught by the Ger.... 注意这里

She and her family had been hiding away..

they hid

wanted a friend whom she could tell , chose

Answer 3

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