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on a summer night , I was sleeping in my bed while I was awakened by loud sound . A hurricane was coming ! my parents and I ran downstairs with the scaring dog in my arms . soon I hear the loud noise of my house being thrown this way and that . the door was shaking as if anyone were trying to violently get it open . the hurricane was lasted about 20 minutes . many things were blown away . some books of my were found half a mile far , and my broken-up bed was found far away from my house . fortunate , my family and my dog were okay . I will never forget the night which mother nature showed her destructive power .

Answer 1

1、on a summer night ——In a summer night
2、 I was sleeping in my bed while I was awakened by loud sound .—— I was sleeping on my bed ,And suddenly loud sound not far from here woke me up.你可以琢磨琢磨原句，是否存在意义上的问题。
3、my parents and I ran downstairs with the scaring dog in my arms . 不明白狗到底在你父母还是你怀里抱着。最好分开改为2句话。
4、 soon I hear the loud noise of my house being thrown this way and that .时态错了，动词应该用过去式。
5、the hurricane was lasted about 20 minutes was 要去掉。last没有被动语态。
6、some books of my were found half a mile far 。改为some books of mine were found half a mile away.
7、fortunate , my family and my dog were okay fortunate改为副词形式 fortunately
8、I will never forget the night which mother nature showed her destructive power .改为：
I will never forget the night when our mother nature showed her destructive power .

Answer 2

第一行 while 改为 when by loud sound 改为by a loud sound
第二行 scaring 改为scared hear 改为 heard
第三行 were 改为 was
第四行 lasted 改为 lasting
第五行 my 改为 mine far 改为 away
第六行 fortunate 改为fortunately which 改为 when

Answer 3

On a summer night , I was sleeping in my bed when I was woken up by loud sound . A hurricane was coming ! my parents and I ran downstairs with the scaring dog in my arms . soon I heard the loud noise of my house being thrown this way and that . the door was shaking as if anyone were trying toget it open violently . the hurricane lasted about 20 minutes . many things were blown away . some books of mine were found half a mile away , and my broken-up bed was found far away from my house . fortunately , my family and my dog were okay . I will never forget the night when mother nature showed her destructive power .

另外，每个句子开头大写。

Answer 4

1. while 改成when
2.by loud sound 改成 a lound sound
3.scaring 改成 scared
4.hear 改成 heard
5.anyone 改成someone
6.to violently 改成 violently to
7.was lasted 改成 lasted
8.books of my 改成 books of mine
9.far 改成 away
10.fortunate 改成 fortunately
11.which 改成 when或In which

Answer 5

on a summer night, I was awaked by some loud sound when I have fallen asleep. It turned out that a hurricane was happenning! My parents and I ran downstairs with our scared dog in my arms. as soon as we get to the safe place,we found our house was on the verge of collaspe.the door was shaking as if someone was trying to violently break into.Many things were blew away and destroyed when the hurricane finally disappeared 20 minutes later.fortunately all my families were got injuried. I will never forget that night that our mother of nature showed us her unknown destructive power.