Question

初二了，老师让写一篇英语作文：My lifestyle （60-80词），请大家看看我写的作文有木有语法错误。

My lifestyle
I think my lifestyle is very healthy.I eat fruit three or four times a week like apples ，bananas and pears. And I never drink coffee because I think that's unhealthy.I exercise and drink milk every day.Oh , I don't like junk food, so I never eat it .My lifestyle helps me to keep in good health.And it helps me get good grades.

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Answer 1

I eat fruit three or four times a week like apples ，bananas and pears. 这句有点问题 可以改成：I have fruit for four times a week.Such as,apples,bananas and peras.还有.My lifestyle helps me to keep in good health.应该改为 My lifestyles help me keep healthy.

追问

I eat fruit three or four times a week like apples ，bananas and pears. 请问这句出什么问题了？

追答

three or four times中文是三或四次,可是在英文上这个语法是错误的.week後面应该用个标点符号隔开,eat和like在英语的使用习惯上比较常用have和such as代替.

Answer 2

木有错误啊！