Question

求翻译..中译英

要求：很多地方都不用达到我所要希望表达的语言效果，但是一定要语法通畅，看我剧本的是美国老师（谢谢帮忙

Scene 1：
今天是高中开学的第一天，但是当我起床以后发现自己已经迟到了。
我匆匆的穿好衣服后往学校飞奔，在路上我看到了一位老奶奶倒在地上..
我：“哦..天啊，她晕过去了！该死，我没带手机 打不了求救电话”
这时一位男生慢悠悠的经过
我：“那位同学，这位老奶奶晕过去了，你能帮下忙吗？”
Lin：“不好意思，我上学要迟到了..帮不了你”
说完他慢悠悠的往高中走去，看来他和我是同一所高中。
但是丝毫看不出他有很着急去学校的样子。
我：“等等..我没带手机，你可以借我用一下吗？”
Lin回头看了看我：“你会不会诈骗我手机？”
我强忍着心中的怒火：“不会的，你看我是那种人吗？这位老奶奶晕过去了 她需要危险”
Lin：“她有可能是你找来的托..”
我心中的怒火再一次即将喷发，但是我的理智控制了它
我：“那请问你能不能call for an ambulance？”
Lin犹豫了一会儿，答应了我
Lin大喊:"a-m-b-u-l-a-n-c-e!!!!!"
我的理智一下子崩溃了，我丢下了这个老奶奶和Lin一起走往学校..
我：“shit，谁爱管谁管吧！”
Scene 2:
我和Lin来到了学校，神奇的是他居然和我一个班级..看来我以后要和这家伙打交道一年了
我推开教室的门：“不好意思，我们迟到了”
Tony（老师）：“进来吧，最后2个是你们的座位”
当我进教室后，发现吵闹声不断，明明是上课时间，为什么大家都能这么大声呢？
不久后我找到了原因所在。tony老师完全自顾自的在上课，不管学生有多吵闹，他都置之不理。
10分钟以后..教室的声音已经达到了噪音的地步。
Tony老师终于忍不住了，拍了一下桌子，教室里一下安静了
Tony：“前面听歌的同学叫中间说话的同学声音轻一点，不要打扰了后面睡觉的同学”
话音刚落，教室里又回到了之前的吵闹声。
看了我今天不但遇到了最糟糕的同学还遇到了最糟糕的老师..

Answer 1

Scene 1: Today is the first day of my high school. When I get up, I find I am late. I hurriedly put on my clothes and rush to the school. On the road I see a grandma fallen on the ground.
ME: Oh my god! She has fainted. Damn it, I don’t bring my cellphone with me so I can’t call for help.
A boy is passing by slowly.
ME:Hello, this grandma has fainted. Would you do me a favor?
LIN: I’m sorry, I’m late for school.I.....can’t help you.
Then he continues walking to school. It seems that we are in the same school. But he is everything but hurrying to school.
ME: Wait a munite. I forget to bring my cellphone today. Can I borrow your phone?
LIN looks back at me, “Are you going to swindle my cellphone?”
I try hard not to shout at him, “No, am I look like a swindler? This grandma has fainted and is in danger.”
LIN: She might be shill.
Anger possesses me once again, but I am not overcome.
ME: Anyway, can you at least call for an ambulance, with your phone?
Lin hesitates, and then agrees.
Lin shouted out, “a-m-b-u-l-a-n-c-e!!!!!”
I am defeated, leave this grandma behind and go to school with Lin.
ME: Shit, what is my business!

Scene 2: Lin and I enter the school. It is a miracle that we are classmates. We have one year’s bad connection with each other.
I push open the door, “Sorry, we are late.”
TONY (TEACHER): Come in. The last two seats are yours.” After I walk into the classroom, I find it strange that the class is not quiet at all though it’s class time. Soon I figure out the reason. Tony just gives his lesson, ignoring the students talking. Ten munites later, it grows to a noise.
Tony finally can’t tolerate it and thumps on the table. The classroom becomes less noisy.
TONY: Students listening to music in the front tell students sitting in the middle to talk less aloud so as not to disturb those sleeping in the back. Upon hearing this, the class returns to noisy. I have met the worst classmate and also the worst teacher today.

Answer 2

Scene 1:
Today is my first day of high school, but when I woke up to find yourself late.
I flying to school after hurriedly dressed. On the road, I saw an old lady fell to the ground ..
Me: "Oh .. my God, she fainted! Damn, I did not bring the phone that can call for help."
Then I saw a boys passed by leisurely
I: "Could you help her please?"
Lin: "Excuse me, I am going to belate .. can not help you"
Then he leisurely passed by. Sadly it seems that he and I are in the same high school.
And he did not seem to be in a hurry at all!
Me: "then, can I borrow your phone?"
Lin looked back at me: "You won't steel my phone?"
I tried hard to keep clam, saying: "No, I'm not the kind of person. I only want to help the old lady"
Lin: "She could be someone who play this whole drama with you"
The anger came once again, but I controlled it
Me: "The could you call for an ambulance?"
Lin hesitated for a moment, agreed.
Lin shouted: "A-M-b-u-l-a-n-c-e!!!!"
My crashed, forgot about the old lady and go to school with Lin together ..
Me: "Leave this to those who cares!"

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