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请高手帮忙看下翻译里的语法错误及用词不当等问题，很久没接触英语了，问题估计多多，谢谢了

Hello，Everybody！I am an student studying in the foster talent to test primary school（育才实验小学，不知道翻译对不-_-///）.
The historical clock has already entered in 2008, was away from in August on 8 this great time to be more and more near（历史的时钟已经进入了2008年，距离8月8日这个伟大的时刻越来越近了）. As a Chinese, my mood is becoming more and more excited, I think frequently, what we will be supposed to make in the future 152 days and nights for the Olympic Games?
First I should study Olympic Games knowledge, understand the spirit that the Olympic Games young hero strives for success. I should remember the time Uncle Xu Haifeng at the Los Angeles Olympic Games wins first gold medal, remember Uncle Wang Yifu eject the last gun at the Sydney Olympic Games, remember each athlete's sweat and endeavor, and use the spirit strives for success in my study life, do not fear the difficulty, complete each matter earnestly!
Then, I also should practice English, when the Olympic Games begin, I can exchange with friends come from all corners of the country, tell our Beijing, our Olympic Games to them. I will do my best to be an Olympic Games young messenger.
Once more, I must cherish the environment, let the sky bluer and water cleaner in Hangzhou in 2008. Starts from me, not randomly take out rubbish and disposed of it classifiedly; I will use electricity frugal and protect our precious resources; I will cherish the flowers and plants trees, participate in the tree-planting activity positively; I also will tell each person by me, our Olympic Games should be green Olympic Games!
152 days and nights is too short, I also have many many matter to want to do, but I knew so long as we pay diligently, so long as we grow health, we may proudly say: I have made the contributions towards 2008 Beijing Olympic Games!
谢谢帮忙修改啊！！
大家都睡觉了吗，55，明天一大早就要交的，问题文章哎

Answer 1

你好，大家！我是一个学生学习，在培养人才，以测试小学（育才实验小学，不知道翻译对不-_-///).
历史的时钟已经进入2008年，距离在8月8日这个伟大的时间越来越多，也越来越近（历史的时钟已经进入了2008年的年，距离八月八日这个伟大的时刻越来越近了） 。作为一个中国人，我的心情越来越兴奋，我觉得频繁，我们将假定，以使在今后152天昼夜，为奥运会吗？
首先，我要学习奥运知识，了解精神，奥运的青年英雄，争取取得圆满成功。我记得当时叔叔许海峰在洛杉矶奥运会上赢得首面金牌，还记得叔叔王义夫弹出去年枪在悉尼奥运会上，请记住，每个运动员的汗水和努力，用精神争取成功，在我的研究生活中，不惧怕困难，完成每件事认真！
然后，我也应该实行英语，当奥运会开始，我可以交流的朋友来自社会各角落的国家，告诉我们北京，我们的奥运会给他们。我会尽我所能，成为奥运会的年轻信差。
再一次，我一定要珍惜环境，让天更蓝水更清在杭州在2008年。开始，从我身上，而不是随意拿出垃圾和丢弃它classifiedly ;我将使用电力节约和保护我们宝贵的资源，我会珍惜花卉和植物的树木，参与植树植树活动的积极开展，我也将告诉每一个人由我，我们的奥运会应该成为绿色奥运！
152天和夜是太短了，我也有很多很多事情想做的事，但我知道，只要我们付出努力的，只要我们健康成长，我们完全可以自豪地说：我作出了贡献，对2008年北京奥运。游戏！

Answer 2

Hello，Everybody！I am a student studying in a primary school for talented students
The historical clock has already entered 2008, coming nearer and nearer to August 8 ,the great moment .
As a Chinese, I am becoming more and more excited, I frequently think of what we will be supposed to do to make the future 152 days and nights for the Olympic Games?
First I should study the knowledgeabout the Olympic Games , understand the spirit that the Olympic young heroes strive for success. I should remember the time when Uncle Xu Haifeng won the first gold medal at Los Angeles Olympic Games , remember Uncle Wang Yifu shot the last gun at Sydney Olympic Games, remember each athlete's sweats and endeavor, and use the spirit to strive for success in my study life. I will not fear the difficulty, and will complete each task earnestly!
Then, I should also practice English, and so when the Olympic Games begin, I can exchange ideas with friends coming from all corners of the world, tell them about Beijing, and our Olympic Games . I will do my best to be an Olympic young messenger.

Once more, I must cherish the environment, make the sky bluer and water cleaner in Hangzhou in 2008. Starting from me,do not take out rubbish and dispose it freelt; I will use electricity frugal and protect our precious resources; I will cherish the flowers and plant trees, participate in the tree-planting activity positively; I will also tell each person around me, our Olympic Games should be green Olympic Games!
152 days and nights is too short, I also have many many tarks to do, but I knew so long as we play diligently, so long as we grow healthy, we may proudly say: I have made contributions to the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games!