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我出生于一个和睦的家庭，我的爸爸常年在外经商，是爸爸宽厚的肩膀支撑了整个家，每天我们能在一起的时间很短，可是当我们在一起的时候，他就会逗我开心。如果我在学习或者生活上遇到困难，我总会向他取经。爸爸经常谆教我要怀有大海的胸怀，能容纳常人难容之事，才能做大事。我的妈妈是个工厂的经理，从亲戚那我知道妈妈为了我们忍受常人无法承受的苦，所以从小我就为了分担母亲的负担而锻炼自己坚强、永不放弃、自力更生、敢于拼搏的品质。现在我会更加努力学习使自己强大起来，这样才能保护我亲爱的家人。

2010年的高考失利，使我倍受打击，同时大学生毕业即失业的现象让我对大学更加排斥，决定在社会寻找自己的价值。可是，真正开始找工作的时候才知道学历的重要性。中国已经有那么多的大学生，高中生根本找不到工作，即便找到工作也没有发展。看到我爸爸的公司管理和生产都有很多弊端而不能改善，我才知道大学对我是多么的重要。我希望在大学学习经营学，我把自己的想法跟家人说了后，家人也支持让我去韩国学习。
我认为如果一个男人没有经历足够多的磨难，是不会成功的。经过八个月的韩语学习生活，使我对韩国的各个方面都有了更多了解和认识，也坚定了我继续在韩国继续学习下去的决心，我妈妈爸爸也很支持我去韩国学习。家人希望我能在韩国学到有用的知识、磨练自己的意志，成为一个能为社会发光发热的有用人才，而且我是一直以此作为自己奋斗的目标不断努力着。
此致
敬礼！
申请人：
2012年8月31日

Answer 1

I was born in a harmonious family.My father runs business outside all year around and put all the family on his shouders.As a result, we only have short time to be together.While ,everytime we get together,he will try to please me.I can always ask advices from him whenever I meet with difficulties in my study or life.My father always teaches me to be tolerant.He said that one can achieve things only when he can stand what others can't do. My mother is a manager of a factory.I got to know from my relatives that she has suffered what is unbearable to others.So I cultivated the quality of strong,persistence,independence and courage since I was very young in order to share the burden of mother.Now I will work harder to learn to be stronger,so that I can protect my families.

It struck me a lot when I failed my College Entrance Examination.At the same time, I became more rejected to college due to the phenomenon that college students are unemployees the time when they graduate.I determined to find out my own value in the society.However, not until I had begun to find a job did I realise the importance of educational background.There have already been so many university students in China. It is impossible for a senior high school student to find a job, and even if is it possible,he who succeeds can't gain further development.Seeing many Management and production problems in my father's company which can't be dealt with properly,I know how significant the college is for me.I hope to learn administrative engineering in college.After telling my families my thoughts,I got the supports to futher my study in Korea of my families.

I think a man can't succeed without undergoing enouth obstacles.I have got to know more about Korea after studying Korean there for 8 months,which firmed my determination to move on.My parents really back me up in studying in Korea and they hope that I can gain useful knowledge, hone my will and become a useful talent to the society.It is also my aim which I am heading for constantly.

Your sincerely,

Applicant:xx
8/31/2012

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Answer 2

I was born in a harmonious family, my dad outside year round business, is a generous dad's shoulders to support the entire family, every day we can be together a short time, but when we were together, he would tease me happy. If I learning difficulties in life, I always learn from him. Dad often Zhun taught me want to cherish the bosom of the sea, can accommodate ordinary people hardly contain the matter, can do great things. My mother was a factory manager from relatives that I know Mom For us to endure the pain of ordinary people can not afford, so I grew up on in order to share the burden of the mother to exercise their own strong and never give up, self-reliance, courage and hard work quality. Now I will be more to study hard to make themselves stronger, so as to protect my dear family.

2010 college exam, so I disproportionately hard hit, while university graduates that the phenomenon of unemployment University more exclusive, decided to find their own value in society. However, when it really started to find a job to know the importance of academic qualifications. China has so many college students, high school students simply can not find a job, did not even find a job development. See my father's company management and production, has a lot of drawbacks not improve, I learned that the University of how important it is to me. I hope to study Business Administration at the University, my own thoughts with the family said the family support so I went to Korea to learn.
If a man does not have enough experience ordeal is not successful. Korea Korean school life after eight months, so I have a greater understanding and knowledge, I continue to work in South Korea continue to learn and determination to continue firm, also very supportive of my mom and dad I went to Korea to learn. The family hopes in South Korea, I was able to learn useful knowledge, hone their own will become a useful talent for social luminous fever, and I have as a goal of their struggle constantly trying.
Yours
Salute!
Applicant:
August 31, 2012

追问

谷歌翻译的不对啊。

Answer 3

I was born in a happy family, my dad outside year round business, is the father of the generous shoulder to support the entire family, every day we can at the together time is very short, and when we are together, he will make me happy. If I am learning or meet with difficulties in life, I always to learn his. My father often had taught me to have the sea mind, can hold things difficult for the matter, can do great things. My mother is a manager in a factory, from relatives that I know for mother we bear ordinary person cannot bear the pain, so I grew up in order to share the burden on the mother to exercise their own strong, never give up, rely through one's own efforts, the courage to fight the quality. I will be more efforts to study now make yourself strong, so as to protect my dear family.
The failure in the college entrance examination in 2010, made me shock, while unemployed graduates phenomenon let me on the university more rejection, decided to find their own value in the society. However, the real start looking for a job when they know the importance of education. China has so many college students, high school students can not find jobs, even to find work and no development. I see my dad 's company management and production has many drawbacks and can not improve, I know that the University told me how important it is. I wish to study at university business school, I put your ideas with family after family support, let me go to Korea Republic study.
I think that if a man does not have enough much suffering, will not be successful. After eight months of Korean learning life, made me on all aspects of South Korea have more knowledge and understanding, I also firmly keep in Korea to study on determination, my parents are also very supportive of my go to Korea Republic study. The family hopes that I can learn the useful knowledge in Korea, hone their will, to become useful talents for a society to shine, and I have as their goal of continuous efforts.
Yours sincerely
Salute!
Applicant.
August 31, 2012

Answer 4

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