谁帮我修改一下这篇英语作文,可以删改。急啊!!!

MyCanadianTripThissummerholiday,IwenttoCanada.Iwassoexitedtobethereandhadagoodtimedur... My Canadian Trip
This summer holiday, I went to Canada. I was so exited to be there and had a good time during the three weeks.
When I lived in City of Vancouver, I found there were many difference. First I found Canada is a really beautiful country. There have many maples, and the environment is cleaner than China. Second, the eating habits in Canada are also different. They like eating fewer things at lunch time, such as a sandwich, some fried chicken, or mashed potato. In my host family, we often ate dinner at eight p.m. I thought it is too late to eat dinner. And they like eating everything with butter. I don’t it is a good habit. Third,
The transportation there is not busy enough. They always use their hand to show someone who is interfere with traffic to go first. It’s a good way to have the transport facilities.
In the school, I studied in the morning, and in the afternoon, I had activity club. I made a lot of friends in the club. We often speak in English at school. Sometimes
We went to somewhere to travel. When I travel to somewhere, I leaned a lot of new things.
This summer holiday, I leaned a lot of things, and I also improved my English pronunciation. I used to be terrified of speaking in front of other people, but now I don’t be terrified of speaking in front of other people. I felt I was more confident and grow up. If I can ,I will go to Canada again. I love Canada.
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张娜娜ANNA
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I was so exited to be there exited改为excited

When I lived in City of Vancouver city前面加the,表特指
many difference difference加s表复数
and the environment is cleaner than China.最好是 the environment is cleaner than that in China
I don’t it is a good habit. ti前加上think
It’s a good way to have the transport facilities,你想表达什么意思?
I had activity club,i have joined a club
but now I don’t be terrified of speaking in front of other people.,可以简短一点,不要前后重复。可以改为,but now i donot think so
I felt I was more confident ,是现在感觉吗,那就用现在时态
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貌似有些错误,但我也只是初中生了,不太确定。
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2012-09-22
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There have many maples改成there are many maples
其他的我就没找到,可能还有一点吧,不过我觉得你写的很好啊
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2012-09-22
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不用改了吧,写得很好
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语法错误有吗?
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