Question

求帮忙修改英语句子！！

1.In Nikos Kazantakis’s short story “A night in a Calabrian Village”, I learned that helping others will let both feel thankful.
2.The protagonist is from Greece, so he became a stranger in Italy.
3.Because rained all day long, it was cold night outside that make the protagonist feel cold,wet,tired and hungrey.
4.The protagonist want to have a place to sleep for a night.
5.Before he came here, his grandpa always look for strangers and bring them home, so he thought everyone will be as same as his grandpa, he wasn’t scaried to come to Italy.
6.Actually when he came to Italy he feels really upset, because no one would be friendly to take a straiger home.

这六句话是一段完整的段落。亲们，帮我把每句的错误都找找吧，有些是病句，有些是大小写问题，选词不当，语法，标点符号，长短句等。亲们帮我找找吧，越多越好。在word里只找到几个，老师却说有很多。

Answer 1

1.I learned that helping others will let both feel thankful.
这儿你用了一个宾语从句，主句用的是一般过去时，从句应该使用过去的相应时态，所以从句will应该改为would。“使双方都心怀感激”可以这么说“make both of us feel thankful ”.
2.你想表达“主人公来自希腊（希腊人熟知他），但对于意大利人来说，人们完全不了解他”，可以这么说：The protagonist was known in Greece,while he was a completely stranger for the Italian.
3.想表达的意思是“整天下雨的缘故，使得夜晚外面寒冷潮湿，主人公更加觉得疲惫，饥饿”，可以这么说“As it rained all day long,it was cold and wet outside at night,which made the protagonist feel more tired and hungry. ”
4.The protagonist want to have a place to sleep for a night.
错误之处是：要注意保持主谓一致，The protagonist是单数，所以应该用wants，但是又因为通篇用的是一般过去时，所以最好用wanted，for a night写成“at night ”
5.his grandpa always look for strangers and bring them home。这句话主谓不一致，另外就是句意不通，改成这样“his grandpa always gave hand to those homeless people and brought them home ,although they were strangers for him”.
so he thought everyone will be as same as his grandpa, he wasn’t scaried to come to Italy.这句话又出现了第一句话中出现的错误，will改成would，the same as是固定搭配，scared是正确的拼写方法。整句话这样写“so he thought everyone would be the same friendly as his grandpa, which encouraged him to come to Italy with no fear”.
6.Actually when he came to Italy he feels really upset,这句话中时态不一致，feels改成felt就好了。
第二句改成这样更好：because no one would be friendly enough to take a stranger home.
希望帮助到你，学习进步。

Answer 2

太难了