这道英语改错怎么写?
共有九错误一正确,我用﹠表示句末:DearSir,I'maseniorthreestudent.Ioftendobadinmy&exams,soIhavebeentryi...
共有九错误一正确,我用 ﹠表示句末: Dear Sir, I'm a senior three student. I often do bad in my&exams,so I have been trying to catch up the others.&But I'm such concerned about my marks that sometimes&I cannot eat or sleep well at a night .I'm afraid that&i(我不大写了,忽略大写)may get low marks in the test again as if i work&hard than before.i have no courage to face low marks.&i cannot fix my mind on my study,whenever i think of&this.it is obvious that the worry had a bad effect on&my school works.i'm feeling very sad.would you&pkease telling me how i should deal with my worry?
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1. I often do badly in my examinations,
2.But I'm so concerned about my marks
3. that I cannot eat or sleep well often
4. I'm afraid that I will get low marks
5. even if i work harder than before.
6. I cannot focus my mind on my study
7. whenever I think about this
8. bad effect on my school work
9. Would you please tell me how..
2.But I'm so concerned about my marks
3. that I cannot eat or sleep well often
4. I'm afraid that I will get low marks
5. even if i work harder than before.
6. I cannot focus my mind on my study
7. whenever I think about this
8. bad effect on my school work
9. Would you please tell me how..
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1.catch up 后面应该加个with
2.such 改成 so
3.at a night 把a 去掉
4.as if 改成even if
5.had a bad effect 改成has
6.please telling me 改成please tell me
其它的没看出来……
2.such 改成 so
3.at a night 把a 去掉
4.as if 改成even if
5.had a bad effect 改成has
6.please telling me 改成please tell me
其它的没看出来……
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cath up with;so concerned about ...that...; as if 改为so;fix改为focus;telling改为tell
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1.bad——badly
2.catch up——加with
3,such——so
4.a——去掉
5.as if——even if
6.hard——harder
7.fix——focus
8.had——has
9.无
10.telling——tell
2.catch up——加with
3,such——so
4.a——去掉
5.as if——even if
6.hard——harder
7.fix——focus
8.had——has
9.无
10.telling——tell
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trying--------tried
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