Question

这句英文有没有错误

不错，他的确刚买了一只羔羊，阿列科解释说，但他的羔羊是黑色的。迪米特里为自己的鲁莽而感到不好意思，向阿列科道了歉，说是错怪了他。就在他俩说话的时候，天下起了雨，迪米特里便呆在阿列科家里避雨，一直等到雨停为止。半小时后，当他从屋里出来时，他惊奇地发现小黑羔羊全身几乎都变成白色。原来羊毛上染的黑色被雨水冲掉了！
Exactly, Aleko explained he just had bought a lamb,but the lamb was black.Dimitri was so ashamed to his precipitance and he apologized to Aleko. When they were talking about,there was rain and then Dimitri went into Aleko’house and he stayed there until the rain stopped. After half hour,when he went out of the house, he found surprisedly that the black color lamb became a white one. In fact, the black of the wool which had been pigmented was crushed by rain
这句英文有错吗？请就这段话进行分析。最好别另外翻译。谢谢

Answer 1

参考修改：

• Exactly, Aleko explained he had just bought a lamb, but it was black.

• Dimitri was ashamed of his precipitance and he apologized to Aleko.

• When they were talking, it started to rain.

• So Dimitri went into Aleko’s house and stayed there until the rain stopped. 

• After half an hour, he went out, and he surprisedly found that the black lamb had changed to be a white one.

• In fact, the stained wool was washed by rain

Answer 2

很高兴为您解答

有错误哦：1、had bought 最好改为 bought 2、be ashamed to 不当 3、talking about 这里不当
很有一些错误，建议自己再好好检查哦

追问

倒数第3个单词我打错了不是crushed 是washed。除了你已经说了的，其他还有错吗。我没看出来呢

Answer 3

he found surprisedly that the black color lamb became a white one.
>>>he was surprised to find that the black lamb had changed to be a white one.

Answer 4

when they were talking about中的about 应当去掉。
there was rain可改为rain dropped或it started to rain.
after half hour应改为after half an hour.