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On my way home on the bus,I saw an old man to get on with his grandson.He was carrying the boy schoolbag and violin.I offered my seats to the old man at once.Therefore,the boy sat down first.The old man has to stand nearby.After a while,the boy shouted to her grandma for water and then dropped the empty bottle over the bus.When I saw this,I got much angry.I think the boy should only respect and take care of the old man but also keep an environment clean.

Answer 1

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On my way home on the bus, I saw an old man (去掉to) get on with his grandson. He was carrying the (boy改成boy's) schoolbag and violin. I offered my (seats改成seat) to the old man at once. (Therefore改成However), the boy sat down first. The old man (has改成had) to stand nearby. After a while, the boy shouted to (her改成his) grandpa for water and then dropped the empty bottle (over改成on) the bus. When I saw this, I got (much改成very/most) angry. I think the boy should (加入not) only respect and take care of the old man but also keep (an改成the) environment clean.

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Answer 2

On my way home on the bus, I saw an old man to【去掉to】 get on with his grandson. He was carrying the boy【boy’s】 schoolbag and violin. I offered my seats【seat】 to the old man at once. Therefore【However】, the boy sat down first. The old man has【had】 to stand nearby. After a while, the boy shouted to her grandma 【his grandpa 】for water and then dropped the empty bottle over【from】 the bus. When I saw this, I got much【very】 angry. I think the boy should 【加上not】only respect and take care of the old man but also keep an 【the】environment clean.
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