Question

假设你要参加学校英语学习俱乐部的一次英语作文大赛,参赛作文要求如下:①分享你最难忘的一次经历。

②说明这次经历给你带了了什么样的经验、教训，让你学到了什么新的东西，或是让你有什么感受、心得。③70词左右。
题目为 My Unforgettable Experience。
在线等，急

Answer 1

　　Do you have any unforgettable experience? Certainly I think, so do I. Last spring, on a sunshine day, our students and teachers visited East Park. When we went into the park, we saw many colorful flowers and several beautiful butterflies dancing on the flowers, even the little bees were attracted by such beautiful scene. Suddenly, we smelled the stinking air. We all frighted and looked for the reason. On the back of a food shop, there were many plastic bags and bottles with dirty oil floating on the lake. We all felt angry. We thought we must do something to change the situation.

追问

最后一句你确定是结尾吗。。怎么觉得不全。。

追答

70个词 再往下可就悠不住了....这也不够忽悠的啊
要是往下继续的话 你可以在网上找环境污染方面的心得体会再加上一两句

追问

= = 好吧好吧。反正我英语不好。