Question

英语。帮忙看看这句话有没有语法错误

The story was about a blind girl for being robbed and leave originally familiar road, through the fence in the unknown world, against the visual senses outside on a great adventure.

Answer 1

最明显的就是时态上的问题。
改正过来的句子应该是这样的："The story was about a blind girl who had been robbed and left original familiar road, passed though the fence in the unknown world, against the visual senses outside on a great adventure."

“本故事是关于一个被抢劫了的盲人女孩，离开了原本熟悉的道路，通过了位置世界的围栏，对抗着一场伟大历险的外部视觉。 ”

由于原句中第一句的歧义，还可以这样理解："The story was about a blind girl whose sight had been robbed." 本故事是关于一个被剥夺了视觉的盲女.........

如果你有这句话的本来意思，可以拿出来参考一下，可以根据意思重新翻译出正确的英语句子。

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Answer 2

The 好像用this 再说故事是过去式的你用的很乱啊啊，都忘了

Answer 3

for 改成of leave 改成left in 改成on

Answer 4

leave 应该改成left 表过去

Answer 5

好像有语法错误，也看不懂什么意思。