I’ll never to forget my favorite teacher from second grade, Miss Gnagy. 5

I’llnevertoforgetmyfavoriteteacherfromsecondgrade,MissGnagy.IlovedhermuchthatIwantedt... I’ll never to forget my favorite teacher from second grade, Miss Gnagy. I loved her much that I wanted to become a teacher just like him one day. At home I would make my own classroom at which I would teach my dolls(玩偶). Years later, my own daughters did the same things. Not surprisingly, I really did became a public-school teacher. I teach elementary school at first. Although I had a degree in education, I found I wasn’t total prepared for teaching —the job was much hard than I thought. It is difficult teach students of different levels well.短文改错。十处 展开
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1 I 'll never to forget改成 to去掉
2 I loved her much that I wanted to become a teacher just like him one day. him改成her
3 I really did became a public-school teacher 改成 become
4 It is difficult teach students of different levels well 改成teaching
5 At home I would make my own classroom at which I would teach my dolls(玩偶)
改成过去式 i made my own classroom i taught mu dolls
你这里时态很混乱,你可以选择用一般时,也可以选择过去式,就看你怎么改了
6 I teach elementary school at first. 改成taught
7 Although I had a degree in education 改成 i have had
8 —the job was much hard than I thought 改成harder
9 It is difficult teach students of different levels well well的前面加个as 就变成as well
10 Years later, my own daughters did the same things 改成 my own daughters would do the same things.

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你那时态很混乱好吗,看你怎么改了
有几个地方是不太确定
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I’ll never to(1、去掉to) forget my favorite teacher from(2、加上the) second grade, Miss Gnagy. I loved her(3、加上so) much that I wanted to become a teacher just like him(4、him改为her) one day. At home I would make my own classroom at which I would teach my dolls(玩偶). Years later, my own daughters did the same things(5、改为thing). Not surprisingly, I really did became(6、改为become) a public-school teacher. I teach (7、改为taught)elementary school at first. Although I had a degree in education, I found I wasn’t total(8、改为totally) prepared for teaching —the job was much hard(9、改为harder) than I thought. It is difficult (10、加上to)teach students of different levels well.
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