Question

求大神帮忙修改一下英语作文，要求，过度依赖电脑带来的问题以及自己的看法

Don’tRely Too Much on Computers
With
the rapid development of technology, computers have already become a part of
our life.
And
computers seem to make our work much easier but not if people rely too much on
it. Owing to this, many problems follows.
First
of all, they rely too much on computer can make us slow to react. Second, using
computers for a long time will makes our neck and eyes vague ached. Last but
not least, we may lose the ability to communicate with others in real world.
So,
in short, we geared to the challenge of the future is to make the best use ofthe computer, but not overly depend on it.

Answer 1

Don’tRely Too Much on Computers With the rapid development of technology, computers have already become a part of
our life.
And then ,computers seem to make our work much easier but not if people rely too much on
it. Owing to this, many problems follows:First of all, they rely too much on computer can make us slow to react. Second, using computers for a long time will makes our neck and eyes vague ached. Last but not least, we may lose the ability to communicate with others in real world.
So,in short, we geared to the challenge of the future is to make the best use ofthe computer, but not overly depend on it.

Answer 2

Don’tRely Too Much on Computers
With the rapid development of technology, computers have already become a part of our life.
And computers seem to make our work much easier but not if people rely too much on it. Owing to this, many problems follow.First of all, relying too much on computer can make us slow to react. Second, using computers for a long time will make our necks and eyes vague ached. Last but not least, we may lose the ability to communicate with others in real world. In short, if we want to gear to the challenge of the future,we must make the best use of the computer, but not overly depend on it.