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请根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文介绍现代足球的历史。
1，现代足球起源与英国。从八十纪起开始就流行。因为太暴力。人们曾试图禁止这项运动。
2，1815年，英国著名的学校伊顿学院制定了一套规则，其它院校也开始使用。
3，在此基础上诞生的著名剑桥规则被英格兰大多数大学和学院采用。
4，1863年10月26日，伦敦的十一个俱乐部和学校的代表举行了会议，制定了一套规则。足球协会成立。

词数：150左右
参考词汇：一顿学院：Eton College；
代表：：representative

Modern football games comes from english. it started at the 8th century. people try to forbade this sports, because it is too 暴力。
In 1815,the famous school of England called ridun made up a set of rules, than the other school started to use it too.
As this stared the famous jianqiao rules was adopted by most school of England.
In 1863,26th october, 11 clubs and school representation from lodon hold up a meeting, they made up a set of rule. and the football set up.

Answer 1

1st, the modern soccer origins with Britain. Starts from 80 discipline to be popular. Because of too violence. The people once attempted to forbid this movement.
2nd,1815 years, the British famous school Eton institute has formulated set of rules, other colleges and universities also start to use.
3rd, based on this is born famous Cambridge rule by the English Majority Universities and institute use.
4th,1863 years on October 26, London's 11 clubs and school representatives have held the conference, has formulated set of rules. The Soccer association is founded.

就这4点

Answer 2

你翻译的差不多了