Question

帮我检查一下这段英语语法和字母有没有错误

麻烦各位英语高手了，检查这篇短文英语有没有错误，语法有木有问题，（帮我纠正一下，要交的，麻烦各位大哥大姐了……）
A: Hello,B and C,How are you?
嗨，B和C，你们好吗？
B: I'm fine,thanks.
我很好，谢谢。
C: I fell bad today.
我今天感到不太好
A: What's the matter?
怎么了？
C: I have a fever.
我感冒了
A: Oh I'm sorry to hear that.
噢，很抱歉听到这种事
B: I suggest you to have some medicines.
我建议你去吃些药
C: Yeah,i did,but it is little better than before.
是的，我吃了，但只比以前好了一点
B: Well,you ought to drink lots of water and keep enough sleep.
噢，你应该喝多点水并且保持充足的睡眠
C: I did all you say.
你说的我都做了
A: Then you should see a doctor.
那么你应该去看个医生
C: Ok.I will do it,thank you so much.
好的，我会的，非常谢谢你们
A: Yo're welcome.See you !
不客气，再见
B/C: See you!
再见

Answer 1

B: I suggest you to have some medicines.
我建议你去吃些药
C: Yeah,i did,but it is little better than before.
是的，我吃了，但只比以前好了一点

应为:
B: I suggest you to take some medicines.
C: Yeah,i did,but it was just a little better than before.
[时态要保持一致，前面说了did,表示已经吃了，后面要用was]

C: I did all you say.
你说的我都做了

应为：I did all you said.
[已经说了，再做的，所以say用said]

C: I fell bad today.
我今天感到不太好
[这个是你打错了吧？feel或者felt都行，前者比较严谨]

B: Well,you ought to drink lots of water and keep enough sleep.
噢，你应该喝多点水并且保持充足的睡眠

[充足睡眠应为：keep an adequate sleep，enough sleep有汉化成分]

打错字的就不说了吧，如果有用请采纳，谢谢！

Answer 2

B: I suggest you to have some medicines.
我建议你去吃些药
C: Yeah,i did,but it is little better than before.
是的，我吃了，但只比以前好了一点

1.一般吃药用take some medicines,而不用have.
2.如果想表达“只”，则应该加上just。并且little前应该有a。所以是but it's just a lttle better than before.
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C: I did all you say.
你说的我都做了

另外，这个句子本人觉得无语病但别扭。建议加上as。 I did as all you say.
仅供参考

追问

哦，我相信你的没错，谢了~~~~(>_<)~~~~ 我会尽量采纳的
还有，应该是I feel bad today 还是i feeling bad today?

追答

这句话我没有给你改。不过惯用法一般是I‘m not feeling very well. 一般feeling前应该有系动词。

Answer 3

倒数第六句英文，是“you should”;还有倒数第二句英文是“You're”,除此之外没有什么问题，希望这些能帮到你。

追问

对哦，YOU我打错了呵呵，还有第二句的fell 应该是feel

Answer 4

我觉得很不错