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可不可以帮我改一下这篇英语作文，帮我加上一些好的句子和内容，最后结尾

An Enjoyable Trip
Last year, I went to England with my family. I had wonderful trip.
On the first day, we went to London, the capital of England.
We visited some attractions such as Buckingham palace, Big Ben and British Museum.
When we entered the Buckingham palace hall, we were surprised. Because it was wonderful.
Big Ben was the biggest clock in the England, also it was the symbols of London.
British Museum is one of the most famous museum in the world. It collected the precious collection from different countries.
In visiting the British museum, I learned England’s history and culture.
On the next day, we went to oxford street, it was the London shopping centre. It had lots of famous brand and it can let you enjoyed advanced service. I bought some souvenirs to my friends.
In the afternoon, we tried different British food such as English fish chip, roasted beef and Yorkshire pudding.
If I had a chance, I would like to go there again.

Answer 1

An Enjoyable Trip
Last year, I went to England with my family. I had a wonderful trip.
On the first day, we went to London, the capital of England.
We visited some attractions such as Buckingham Palace, Big Ben and British Museum.
When we entered the Buckingham Palace hall, we were surprised. Because it was wonderful.
Big Ben was the biggest clock in England, also it was a symbol of London.
British Museum is one of the most famous museums in the world. It collected some precious collections from different countries.
In visiting the British museum, I learned English history and cultures.
On the next day, we went to Oxford Street, it was London's shopping centre. It had lots of famous brands and it could let you enjoyed advanced services. I bought some souvenirs for my friends.
In the afternoon, we tried different British food such as English fish chip, roasted beef and Yorkshire pudding.
If I had another chance, I would like to go there again.
写的很好了，我只是找到一些小错，例如过去式，大写。祝学习进步！

Answer 2

wonderful 前加 a
capital 后加 city
also it was 改为 it was also

Answer 3

I had a wonderful trip which gives me a deep impression to England with my family .

Answer 4

the capital of England 这句话有问题吧，不应该用the,应该是 London is capital of England