Question

写了一篇英语作文，请各位帮忙挑一下错误，谢谢了~~好的会追加！！

A Generation Gap
I was very unhappy with my parents the other day that we had an arguement .
On that day ,my father's friend invited us for a dinner at his home . No doubt, my parents accived his enthusiasm.However,I refused it .On the reason that ,I failed to stand the atmosphere of adults' party.For instant, smoking,drinking,laughing with noting and more are their main progrems.But for me ,those contribute to my young life went from bad to worse.
Since having a dinner is of such importance for my parents,on wander,they found fault with me about everything. "It's impolite of you to o that."my mother said. Owing to those ,I glared at them and complained that they are too boring and void.
Finallly,there is little chance for us to communicate with each other at that night.
Yesterday,I came back to school .Everything same like to be well.But I know that a generation gap still existed.

Answer 1

应该是这样的：第三行accived改成accepted，第四行enthusiasm改成kindness，第五行and more去掉，第六行contribute to改成make，from bad to worse 改成terrible，第七行 on 改成no 第八行，are 改成were，第九行，is改成was，第十行，everything went well， know 改成 knew
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Answer 2

第三行accived改成accepted，第四行enthusiasm改成kindness，第五行and more去掉，第六行contribute to改成make，from bad to worse 改成terrible，第七行 on 改成no 第八行，are 改成were，第九行，is改成was，第十行，everything went well， know 改成 knew

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