Question

求帮忙英语翻译，谢谢！

送上20悬赏分，请不要用有道翻译这些网页平台来直接翻译并复制黏贴那种中国式英语，如果那里有用，我也不会在这里求助大家，谢谢！以下为要翻译的内容：尊敬的XX先生，订单已经提交给您，我在获得贵公司给我的授权后，还需要通过中国国内电子商务平台对我合法销售XX产品的审核，这一切都顺利完成之后，我会立即支付货款！

Answer 1

尊敬的XX先生，订单已经提交给您，我在获得贵公司给我的授权后，还需要通过中国国内电子商务平台对我合法销售XX产品的审核，这一切都顺利完成之后，我会立即支付货款！
Dear Mr. **,

Hope you are doing fine!

Glad to tell that the order has been placed to you. After getting the authorization from your company,
I shall still pass through the review of domestic e-commerce platform to sell ** products legally.

Upon finishing all these procedures smoothly, I will remit the payment to you.

Thank you for your kind understanding.

Best Regards,

***

外贸人士奉献，手工原创！

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Answer 2

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Dear Mr.XX,
The order was already submitted to you.Having been authorized by your honourable（美国去掉u）company,I am supposed to be admitted to sell XX products legally by China National E-Commerce Platform.Wish everything will be OK and I'll pay you soon.

Answer 3

Dear distinguished MR.XX
The order has been placed to you. After get your company's authorization, we also need to pass the verification conducted by the Chinese domestic E-commerce platform on the legitimate selling of the XX products. After complete all of abovementioned, I will pay the money.

Answer 4

Dear Mr. XX,
The order has been submitted to you.I should get your authorization to apply the legality to sale XX at Chinese e-commerce platform.After getting approved qualifications，all the things will be finished.So I will pay the money immediately!

纯人工翻译，望采纳！