Question

谁能帮我把这篇英语作文修改一下，最好能简化一些，但原意不要变，谢了！

Answer 1

I have a happy family.
My family is made up of 4 people: My father, my mother, my brother, and I. My 42 year-old father is a tall and skinny man who enjoys watching movies and reading books in his spare time. My mother is a beautiful woman, despite being 36 years old. She works in an office. Cooking is her hobby, and the food that she makes are splendid. My brother is a 15 year old student, and we both attend the same school. I am two years younger than my brother, making me 13 years of age, and I love to play sports and listen to music.
I love my family. What about you?

Answer 2

My Family
I have a happy family.
There are four people in my family, which are my father, my mother, my brother and me. My father is a tall, thin,42-year-old man who likes to watch movies and read books. My mother, though already 36, still looks pretty. My brother is a 15-year-old student who go to the same school as I do. I'm 2 years younger than my brother, and like to do sports and listen to the music very much.
I love my family. What about you?