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第二卷写作（共两节，满分35分）第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）此题要求改正所给短

第二卷写作（共两节，满分35分）第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断。每行均有一个错误，请按以下情况进行改正：该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线（﹨）划掉； 该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词； 该行错一个词：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。Dear Tracy,Although I’m 16 years old, but my father still treats 76._______me as a carelessly child. He doesn’t value my opinions. 77._______ He is very strict in me and often punishes me for 78 _______ leaving things lying around in the house when he did this 79._______ all time. I think he fails to set an example to me to 80._______ follow. But he often says: “Doing as I say, not as I do.” 81._______ Even more worse, he points out my past mistakes to guests, 82._______ making me feel hurting. I love my father, but I can’t 83._______ bear how he does. I have tried many times to talk 84._______ with him but he never listen. Please, help me. 85._______ Puzzled

Answer 1

76. 去掉Although或but                   77. carelessly→careless 78. in→with                                          79. did→does 80. 在all后加the                  81. Doing→Do 82. 去掉 more                                   83. hurting→hurt 84. how→what                                    85. listen→listens

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