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Iagreewithopinionthatinordertopreparethestudents'futurelife,parentscanprovideachoiceo...
I agree with opinion that in
order to prepare the students' future life, parents can provide a choice of
part-time job in their spare time.
Firstly, it is an oppptunity
for childen to experience the life of real society. As we all know, students
spends most their time on studying, and they don not have any chance to face
the adult life. And if they take a part-time job, the situation can be verted.
For example, a friend named Lyli worked in a big computer company last summer
holiday. Being an employee, she experienced the highly competition in this job.
She is major in computer science, and she never thinked that she would hold the
huge burden. Through this job, she make a primary step for her future job.
Secondly, taking a part-time
job is a good way to make friends. In our student time, we may have some good
students who have the same course interests or the same experience. But we
can't deny that these students always have some same points with us. But when
we step into society, they will meet different kinds of people. Maybe we do not
have the same experience, but they can give us some new suggustions that we
never heard before. Admittly, being a
graduate student, our social experience is limited. So are our familar friends.
When facing some accidents, the social friends will be more experience and deal
better than we.
Least but not last, working in
our spare time can relieve our parents' burden. We can use the revenue for our
school tuition, and our living expenses can not depend on our parents. We have
been an adult, and we can earn for ourselves. Besides, when we do some
part-time job, we will get to know the difficult of earning money, which will
develop a good habit of saving money. The values will change a lot. For
instance, we will not waste food, and never complicate the old style clothes.
The first step into the adult life is a challenge for the
teenage. And taking a part-time job makes
it easier 展开
order to prepare the students' future life, parents can provide a choice of
part-time job in their spare time.
Firstly, it is an oppptunity
for childen to experience the life of real society. As we all know, students
spends most their time on studying, and they don not have any chance to face
the adult life. And if they take a part-time job, the situation can be verted.
For example, a friend named Lyli worked in a big computer company last summer
holiday. Being an employee, she experienced the highly competition in this job.
She is major in computer science, and she never thinked that she would hold the
huge burden. Through this job, she make a primary step for her future job.
Secondly, taking a part-time
job is a good way to make friends. In our student time, we may have some good
students who have the same course interests or the same experience. But we
can't deny that these students always have some same points with us. But when
we step into society, they will meet different kinds of people. Maybe we do not
have the same experience, but they can give us some new suggustions that we
never heard before. Admittly, being a
graduate student, our social experience is limited. So are our familar friends.
When facing some accidents, the social friends will be more experience and deal
better than we.
Least but not last, working in
our spare time can relieve our parents' burden. We can use the revenue for our
school tuition, and our living expenses can not depend on our parents. We have
been an adult, and we can earn for ourselves. Besides, when we do some
part-time job, we will get to know the difficult of earning money, which will
develop a good habit of saving money. The values will change a lot. For
instance, we will not waste food, and never complicate the old style clothes.
The first step into the adult life is a challenge for the
teenage. And taking a part-time job makes
it easier 展开
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