Question

短文改错，已经改完。能说一下为什么这么改吗？(急用）

Dear Mary,
I receive your E-mail just now. Don’t worry about me. I’m getting on well with
received
my research work in the lab．But to my greatly surprise you say you will give up
great
learn English. The reason is because you have not done well in it recently and you
learning that
have lost interest. I’m afraid I couldn't agree with you . I know it is difficulty
can't difficult
to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today. It will be ∧ important
an
tool in our future work. beside, it is becoming more and more important in our daily
besides
life. If you study hard, you will （be）删除 succeed. Do remember that where there is a will， there is a way. I’ am looking forward to hear good news from you. hearing

Answer 1

1. 第一句中的just now是过去时间状语，所以谓语动词应该用过去式

2. surprise是名词，前面应该用形容词修饰，所以应该用great，而不用greatly

3. give up后面接动名词作宾语，不接动词原形

4. that引导的表语从句，另外，because不和reason连用

5. 这个句子是一般现在时，从I'm afraid就可看出，不用过去式

6. be difficult to do sth 做某事是难的，应该用形容词作表语，而difficulty是名词，形式不对

7. an important tool 一个重要的工具，修饰后面的tool是可数名词，得用an表示“一个”的概念，而且important是元音开头的

8. besides 而且的意思，而beside是在...旁边的意思，它们的意思大相径庭

9. succeed是实义动词，不是形容词，前面不用be动词

10. look forward to doing 盼望做某事，这里的to是介词，后面用动词名，不用动词原形

 

 

 

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Answer 2

1just now.刚才。表示过去的时间词
2surprise 名词，需要形容词来修饰。
3 The reason 原因是，与because因为矛盾。
4I’m afraid 前面是am 故填can't
5 it is +adj +to do sth. difficulty名词
6 an important tool 一个重要的工具
7beside 在~~··旁边 besides 除了~~~·还有，符合句意。
8looking forward to 其中 to 介词后面加动名词形式

Answer 3

just now是刚才，要用过去时
great形容词修饰动词
that表语从句
can’t现在不同意，语气稍强
difficult同great
tool可数
beside旁边，besides另外
look forward to doing
be动词 succee动词

Answer 4

just now过去时；surprise是名词得用形容词修饰， greatly 是副词；give up doing sth 是固定搭配；句子是一般现在时得用can't；it is+形容词+to do sth 所以用 difficult； important tool是名词短语，前面得加冠词，而且important以元音因素开头，所以用an;besides是此外的意思，而beside是在……旁边的意思；looking forward to doing sth期盼某人做某事，是固定搭配；