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Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether it is necessary to include a test of spoken English in the college extrance examination (CEE).
40%students think it is necessary. Here are the reasons following: First of all, speaking is one of the most important skills of English. With the development of the modern society, it becomes more and more important to speak English smoothly. Secondly, including a test of spoken English in CEE will improve the ability of high school students greatly. Finally, it is reasonable to include a spoken English after several years of English study. However,60%students are against the idea. One of the reason is that the test on spoken English is full of subjective ,therefore, the results are might not just as it is in fact .Anther reason is that most students are weak at this field, so it is not suitable to include the test now.
I agree to include a test of spoken English ,because English plays an important role in our future. Moreover, we can take some measures to improve the equitableness of the test.
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Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had on whether it was necessary to include an oral English test in the college extrance examination (CEE).
40%students thought it was necessary. Here are the following reasons: Firstly, speaking is one of the most important skills in English. With the development of the modern society, it has become more and more important to speak English fluently. Secondly, to include a test of oral/spoken English in CEE will improve the ability of high school students greatly. Finally, it is reasonable to include oral English after several years of syudy of English. However,60%students were against the idea. One of the reasons was that the oral English test was quite subjective ,therefore, the results might not just as it is .Anther reason was that most students are weakin this field, so it is not suitable to include the test at present.
I agree to include an oral English test, because English plays an important role in our future. Moreover, we can take some measures to improve the equitableness of the test
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the results are might not just as it is in fact
情态动词放在最前面,楼上已经帮你修改好了,可以参考一下
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