写作思路:要直接简化任务语言。在叙述中,我们要把直接叙述变成间接叙述,尽可能简化人物语言。这样,即使情节连贯,又使语句“简练”。
If you ask me what sport is my favorite sport?I will tell you it is running.
如果你问我我最喜欢的运动是什么,我会告诉你是跑步。
I like running because I think it’s a funny and easy sport. I can do it by myself. I was not very healthy when I was a little child. So my father took me running with him. He said it’s good for me. At first I didn’t like it at all.
But after a few weeks I felt great when I was running. Therefore I go to running every three days. Now some of my classmates run with me. We always talk to each other. I like this sport.
我喜欢跑步,因为我认为这是一个有趣和容易的运动。我可以自己做。我是不是很健康,当我还是个小孩子。所以,我的父亲带我和他一起跑。他说,这是为我好。起初,我不喜欢它。但几个星期后,我感觉棒极了,当我跑。所以,我去跑,每三天。现在,我的一些同学和我一起跑。我们总是互相交谈。我喜欢这项运动。
每天早上,我会很早就起来,然后做一些锻炼。我很喜欢跑步,因此我会围绕着家周围跑步。在街上和公园里跑步,我可以看到这个城市早上的面容,街上很安静,一些人在跳舞,一些人在散步。我很享受早上跑步,我觉得很舒服,感到生活是如此的轻松和愉快。
可不可以把在街上到跳舞哪里改一下