Question

英语改错 10处错误

Answer 1

第二行：去掉"it" ， "shops"改成"shopping"
第三行：在restaurant后面加"in"， "who"改成"which"
第四行："experience"改成"experiences",在这里表示经历的意思，为可数名词，而前面的"tourists"为复数，那么多人的经历当然也应该是复数
"or"改成"and" 前面已经提到是两个有名的主体公园，所以这里应该用and连接
第五行： 去掉"from"，around the world 固定词组
第六行：去掉"must” 把前后句意思理解一下就能明白
"was"改成"is"
最后一行：去掉"very"

Answer 2

I agree that Hong Kong is an attractive place for tourists. I will give reasons why I think so. First of all, Hong Kong is a good place for shopping and eating. There are a rich variety of shops and restaurants in this small city. Moreover, Hong Kong has a lot of attractions that provide tourists with memorable experience. The two famous theme parks, Ocean Park and Disneyland, attract thousands of tourists from around the world. Hong Kong is an international city, but tourists must also enjoy Chinese traditional culture. In conclusion, Hong Kong is a very good choice for tourists.