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I agree that HongKong is the attractive place for tourists.I will give reasons why I think so.First of all,HongKong is a good place for shops and eating.There are a rich variety of shops and restaurants this small city.Moreover,HongKong has a lot of attractions who provide tourists with memorable experience.The two famous theme parks,ocean park or disneyland,attract thousands of tourists from around the world.HongKong is an international city,but tourists must also enjoy Chinese tradition culture.In conclusion,HongKong was a very good choice for tourists.
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Answer 1

我把错误的地方括起来了，用横杠后面的词替换横杠前面的。我看见另外一个同学问这个问题，他贴出的是试卷，里面有一个跟你的原文不同 第二句话是 I think it so 如果是你打错了，那么第二个错误就应是 把 it 去掉。这样的话，下面的第九个就不用修改了，因为你需要挑出十个错误，所以我加了第九个，正常来说，第九个直接是 Chinese traditional culture 就可以了，不过如果那个不改正就不够十个了，所以说如果是你打错了，就按照 I think it so 去掉 it ，而第九个不修改，如果你没打错，就拿第九个凑数吧。我主张第九个不用修改。

I agree that HongKong is ①【the - an】 attractive place for tourists.I will give reasons why I think so.
First of all,HongKong is a good place for ②【shops - shopping】 and eating.
There are a rich variety of shops and restaurants ③【加 in 】 this small city.
Moreover,HongKong has a lot of attractions④【who - that】 provide tourists with
memorable ⑤【experience - experiences】.
The two famous theme parks, Ocean Park ⑥【or - and】 Disneyland,attract thousands of tourists from around the world.
HongKong is an international city,but tourists ⑦【must - can】 also enjoy Chinese
⑧【tradition - traditional】 ⑨【culture - cultures】
In conclusion,HongKong ⑩【was - is】a very good choice for tourists.

注意的是：里面的 Ocean Park，和 Disneyland 首字母要大写。

Answer 2

1.在attractive前加best。2.在give reasons后加to show.3。shop改为shopping。4.restaurants后加in 5.who改为which。6 or改为and。7.but改为so。8.tradition改为traditional

Answer 3

额，你就不能打点标点吗，这样谁受得了啊，而且你也没说是改什么错啊，是该单词错误，还是时态，还是什么？

Answer 4

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My reasons are as follows.
for shopping and eating
in this small city
have a lot of attractions which
ocean park and Disneyland
all around the world
but tourists can(用must 太绝对，有点命令式的）

Answer 5

什么题目？？？？

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