Question

我要参加一个英语面试，写了一段英文，求高手看看有木有语病或更好的表达方式。谢啦！

My expertise is more solid.My comprehensive performance in this professional all students in row in the middle-upper,among them,my practicum result is better, each course practice result is respectively 86, 86, 87, .

我想表达的意思是：我的专业知识比较扎实。我的平均成绩在我们专业排名中上游，其中，实习成绩比较突出，相关各个科目的实习成绩分别是86、86，87。

Answer 1

没啥毛病啊

Answer 2

I was good at my lessons at college and I often ranked the first half in my class. Actually my training performance is especially outstanding. Each course is 86.86and87.