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帮我看下这篇英文文章有没有错误 有的话请帮忙改正

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Dear Xiao Wang，
It is two years since we said goodbye at the airport.What are you doing these days? I miss you very much.
As winter vacation is coming,I'd like to invite you to Shanghai.You know,great changes have taken place in Shanghai,and if you come,I'll take you to go sightseeing,and to go to visit the Bund,Oriental Pearl Tower,Shanghai Museum,Yu Garden and so on.You can take many beautiful photos.
I'm looking forward to seeing you.
Best wishes
Wendy
2012/11/5

Answer 1

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Dear Xiao Wang，
Two years past since we said goodbye at the airport.How are you lately? I miss you very much.
Winter vacation is coming,I'd like to invite you to Shanghai.You know,many great changes have taken place in Shanghai,and if you come,I'll take you to go sightseeing,visit the Bund,Oriental Pearl Tower,Shanghai Museum,Yu Garden and so on.You can take many beautiful photos.
I'm looking forward to seeing you.

Best wishes，

Wendy
2012/11/5

Answer 2

Dear Xiao Wang，
It has been two years since we said goodbye at the airport.What are you doing these days? I miss you very much.
As winter vacation is coming,I'd like to invite you to Shanghai.You know,great changes have been taken place in Shanghai,and if you come,I'll take you to go sightseeing and visit the Bund,Oriental Pearl Tower,Shanghai Museum,Yu Garden and so on.You can take many beautiful photos.
I'm looking forward to seeing you.
Best wishes