英语改错 急 20
2018-07-29
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My soccer coach retired in(去掉in) last week. I wanted to do anything(改something) special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better(改best) biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step(改steps) of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well(改good). My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after(改when) I was packing them up. At a(改the) party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly(改surprisedly) who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just (加to) get some more of these biscuits.” My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy(改enjoying) the biscuits with happy laughter!
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霍桓和青娥改编自原著《青娥》篇。
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2018-07-29
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When I found out that my train would be three hours late, I changed my idea and would get a bus instead. I was about to rush out of the train station while a well-dressed old man took me by my arm,"Young lady,"said the gentleman ,"shouldn't you find out thebus schedule before you rush out and catch the the bus?"I stared at himwith my eyes opened. How did he read my mind? Before I can say a word ,he added,'You see, my train is also running late. The same idea also came to me .But I think a good conversation can help passing the time.Before you know it ,your train will be there’.
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