Question

下面这段英文帮忙改错，谢谢！

Hi,you are far away our topic!

One day, cook call a meeting. Many family poultry are invited to join this meeting. Cook said: we will discuss that how to serve human, that is to say what kinds of food you want to be.
There is silent in the meeting place, nobody say anything. 
Cook encourage attendee: please, please, you can share your any idea with us, just a meeting.
Cow raised his head, looks likely to say something, but still silent.
Cook said: don't hesitate, you can say anything that you want, we should separate ideas from someone delivering them.
Cow stood up, 'in fact we do want not to be eaten by human...'
Cook said with a smile: sorry, sorry, you are far away our topic.

Answer 1

1. Hi,you are far away our topic!

1a. Hi,you are far away from our topic! (away是副词，不能引导宾语。要用from引导宾语）
2.One day, cook call a meeting.
2a. One day, Cook called a meeting. （讲故事，通常用过去时。后面也有大量的过去时，所以这里改成过去时。Cook是一个名字，首字母大写）
3. Many family poultry are invited to join this meeting.
3a. Many family poultries were invited to join this meeting. （复数+过去时）
4.Cook said: we will discuss that how to serve human,
4a. Cook said: we will discuss how to serve human, （how to do 不需要that引导）
5. that is to say what kinds of food you want to be.
5a. that is to say what kind of food you want to be. (kind复数和单数其实从语法和语境上都对。考虑到上下文，单数或许或许会更好一丁点一丁点，对单独一个动物来说，只能成为单独一种食物。当然也可以问你想成为哪几种，所以复数也是对的）
6. There is silent in the meeting place, nobody say anything.
6a. It is silent in the meeting place, nobody say anything. 或 There is silence in the meeting place, nobody say anything. （silent是形容词，silence是名词）
7. Cook encourage attendee: please, please,
7a. Cook encouraged attendee: please, please, （过去时）
8.you can share your any idea with us, just a meeting.
8a. 不需要改
9.Cow raised his head, looks likely to say something, but still silent.
9.Cow raised his head, looking likely to say something, but still silent. （ing表是伴随动作）
10.Cook said: don't hesitate, you can say anything that you want,
10a.Cook said: don't hesitate, you can say anything that you want. （一个完整的句子）
11.we should separate ideas from someone delivering them.
11a.We should separate ideas from someone delivering them.
12.Cow stood up, 'in fact we do want not to be eaten by human...'
12a.不需要改
13.Cook said with a smile: sorry, sorry, you are far away our topic
13a.Cook said with a smile: sorry, sorry, you are far away from our topic.