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英语短文改错

英语短文改错
This morning was very unusually for me.My car was run into by the woman's car.As aresult,neither my car nor her car was drivable.
Luckily no one hurt.Remembering all thestories of kindness and love our teacher oncetells us,Ididn't get angry with this poor woman whom was crying.However,I invited
her into my car to warm up since it was freezing outside.We chatted with while waiting for the police.She soon stopped cry and we ended up saying goodbye with smile.I'm glad to have kept kindness in my heart.

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This morning was very unusual for me.My car ran into by a woman's car. As the result,neither my car nor her car was drivable.
Luckily there was no one that was injured. Remembering all stories about kindness and love that our teacher told us before,I didn't get angry with this crying woman. Instead,I invited her into my car to warm up since it was cold outside.We chatted with each other during waiting for the police.She stopped to cry soon and we ended up with smile.I was very glad to have kept kindness in my heart.

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在学术英语中最好不要用缩写 例如can't 要写成cannot

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10个错误

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usually；was run；no one hurt；of kindness；whom

这篇文章写得真的无力吐槽，写得很不地道。我复制粘贴下来改都改好费劲

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这是高三的题

就叫短文改错

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