Question

高三英语作文“我参加过的一次慈善活动”。要求写爱心义卖，两段式，总100制120字左右 首段叙述：时间，地

高三英语作文“我参加过的一次慈善活动”。要求写爱心义卖，两段式，总100至120字左右
首段叙述，要求包括：时间，地点，参与人数，主办方，活动形式，获得的捐款数，用途（给我们学校的贫困生）
第二段写感想

作文要求无大的语法错误，句子要漂亮。定从，主从，宾从，同从，非谓语等
人在线，12点下，12点选最佳
时间地点人数之类的小细节随便写，我会自己改。关键是结构句式要好，拜谢
怎么没人写。。。。人在线等。。等到再去睡，拜托大家

Answer 1

On March 5th, I attended a Charity Bazaar, which was held by the Students' Union.
All revenues raised from this event were donated to poor children through the organizer.
Mr.Lin was present and made a speech to thank all participants for their continuously supporting poor students. All kinds of beatiful handicrafts attracted plenty of visitors. The Students' Union also sold the Chinese fans and paper-cutting and other Chinese traditional handcrafts.

I think the event this year was a huge success knowing that almost 200 students visited during the first hour only. I bought some DIY chocolates and candies, several books and greeting cards. I hope I can try my best to help the poor students to relieve them of financial burden.

追问

短了点啊，要100左右，能不能再加几句？

追答

At the same time, I am personally touched and heartened to see the enthusiasm and selflessness displayed by our fellow
classmates whose efforts collectively made this event a great success. The many happy faces of our
kind classmates at the event is a wonderful reflection of the spirit of camaraderie and
teamwork - working together for the underprivileged classmates' future.

Answer 2

亲 不瞒你说我英语是不太好 但是作文参加过市比赛

追问

那你的作文呢。。。我要作文。。。