Question

英语改错 求详细解释

Last week my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.
第一行：two-days 改为two-day 第二行：mountain 前加a 第三行：noon后加when 第四行：them改为us 第五行：visiting 改为visited 第六行：pictures；passed 第七行：去down 第八行：and改为but 第九行：去at

Answer 1

1. 复合形容词 带连字符的不加s 比如 a seven-year -old girl year 不加s
2. mountain 可数名词 要么复数加s 要么单数前面加 冠词
3. when 引导时间状语从句“当……的时候”
4. 前后人称要一致
5. 三个并列的谓语动词 fed, visited, told 时态要一致
6. picture 可数名词 要么复数加s 要么单数前面加 冠词 这里用复数 怎么可能照一张照片呢？
7. 这是个句子，需要谓语动词
8. 夜晚来临 down 表示下来 不需要
9.食物很贵但是服务很好 要用but
10 the moment 直接跟从句 表示“一……就……”