Question

求帮忙看看这段英文有没有语法错误！这是我刚写的作文，英语学渣伤不起〒_〒跪求各路大神帮助！！

求帮忙看看这段英文有没有语法错误！这是我刚写的作文，英语学渣伤不起〒_〒跪求各路大神帮助！！ An incident happened on my way to school changed me alot. Yesterday morning, l run to the underground in a hurry. But all of a sudden, l frogot to take the transportant card ang l had no money. That is very terrible. Later, a good girl brought one card for me. I thank her very much. However, she was disappeared soon quickly. For her friendly behaviour, l did not late for school. I still remember her words,'It's doesn't matter. ' From this thing which is filled with kindess l know that love can be found everywhere. As a senior high school student, we should try our best to make the world more beautiful.

Answer 1

还可以 给你简单 修改一下 语法错误
An incident that happened on my way to school has changed me a lot.
Yesterday morning, l hurried to the underground , but all of a sudden l remembered i frogot to take the Public Transportant Card with me and it was even worse that l had no money. That was very terrible. Later, a good girl swiped the card for me. I thanked her very much. However, she disappeared quickly. Because of her help, l was not late for school. I still remember her words,'It's doesn't matter. ' From this thing which is filled with kindess l know that love can be found everywhere. As senior high school students, we should try our best to make the world more beautiful.

Answer 2

and 不是ang ...have no money ,it is terrible …错很多，基本上要全部重写

追问

〒_〒那个是 and 至于错很多……能说的详细点吗，我可以重写的！

追答

你的英语一看就是直接从中文翻译来的了

你可以用华文写给我看吗？