Question

高中短文改错10个

One day in last summer I went to town to go shopping.After walking around for several hours ,I felt tired.I have planned to buy some books ,and I was too tired to walk to the bookstore .Considering that I needed it badly for the coming exam ,I final decided to go there .I arrived at the bookstore , only find a sign on the door reading "Closed on Mondays",How disappointing I was !Complain about my bad luck,I headed for the bus stop.It was only when i got home when I realized it was Tuesday.

Answer 1

One day in last summer I went to town to go shopping.After walking around for several hours ,I felt tired.I have planned to buy some books ,and I was too tired to walk to the bookstore .Considering that  I needed it badly for the coming exam ,I final decided to go there .I arrived at the bookstore , only find a sign on the door reading "Closed on Mondays",How disappointing I was !Complain about my bad luck,I headed for the bus stop.It was only when i got home when I realized it was Tuesday.

1. 第二行：have--had   本打算买书

2. 第二行：and--but      表示转折关系

3. 第三行：final--finally  副词修饰动词决定

4. 第四行：only find--only to find  不定式作结果状语，注意是意想不到的结果才用不定式。

5. 第四行：disappointing--disappointed  我是I，是人，所以ed

6. 第五行：Complain--complaining  与主语I是主谓关系，所以用现在分词

7. 第五行：第二个when--that 这是强调句.It was only when i got home that。。。

看样子没改全啊。

8.第一行：in last--in the last

9.第一行：去掉around

10.第三行：it--them 因为代替的是第二行的some books

前7个没问题，后三个不好说啊，希望采纳

Answer 2

One day, I went to town to do some shopping. A few hours left, I feel very tired. I'm going to buy some books, but I was too tired. Considering that I need it very much, for the upcoming exam, I finally decided to go there. I arrived at the shop, only to find a door on the banners, top write: "closed Monday", I was so disappointed! Complain about my bad luck. When I got home, I realized it was Tuesday.