Question

请你根据以下提示的内容，用英语写一篇80个词左右的短文。

1.我因为喜欢音乐、唱歌，所以最喜欢音乐课。
2.我参加了学校的音乐俱乐部，结交了许多朋友；俱乐部里有许多音乐小组；我们经常在放学后一起练唱，有时在学校的音乐节上演唱。
3.我喜欢那些自己写词、谱曲的歌手。
4.我喜欢安静，不能忍受太吵的音乐，喜欢传统音乐。
注意：
1.使用定语从句。
2.语言规范、字迹工整、意思完整。
急求！！Help！！
80词，80分。你的！！！

Answer 1

I love music and singing. That's why I like music classes. I have joined the school's music club and made a lot of friends. There are many music groups in our school music club. I am in one of them. We often practice singing after school. Sometimes we perform in the school's music concertss.The music instrument I am playing is XXX, and I am getting better everyday because I am frequently aking part in my music club's activities, which gives me plenty of practice opportunities.
I like those singers who are writing their own music and song lyrics. My favourite singer is XXX. But I also prefer quiet music rather than those too noisy ones. Our school will soon hold another music concert. I am really looking forward to it.

已替你写好了，应该足够80词，希望会令你满意。并望采纳，谢谢。

追问

好吧，这位高手。其实这作文看起来有点难度的。请问能不能把哪些词句写简单点的？其实我英语水平只能算是中等偏下的。麻烦了。

追答

其实这些词已经是很显浅的了，无法再用更简单的代替。但我可以把一些较长天认为你可能会有难度的，加上中文翻译好吗?
I love music and singing. That's why I like music classes. I have joined the school's music club(乐俱乐部) and made a lot of friends. There are many music groups in our school music club. I am in one of them. We often practice (练习) singing after school. Sometimes we perform(表演) in the school's music concerts(音乐会).The music instrument(乐器) I am playing is XXX, and I am getting better everyday because I am frequently(很常) taking part in my music club's activities(活动), which gives me plenty of practice(练习) opportunities(机会).
I like those singers who are writing their own music and song lyrics(歌词). My favourite(最喜欢的) singer is XXX. But I also prefer (较喜欢) quiet music rather than (而不是) those too noisy ones. Our school will soon hold another music concert. I am really looking forward(在期望著) to it.

若还有不明的请继续问罢。

追问

嗯嗯，还真有点疑问
The music instrument I am playing is XXX, and I am getting better everyday because I am frequently aking part in my music club's activities, which gives me plenty of practice opportunities这段能不能换成别的简单点的句子呢？
还有就是下一段中的prefe..rather than
我们只学prefer to do sth，这个能不能改下
还有结尾，看不懂。求帮忙，帮忙帮到底
采纳后我会多加50分的，谢谢

追答

I play piano and I am getting better and better because the school music club gives me a lot fo chances to practice.

I prefer quiet music and I don't like noisy ones. 我比较喜欢柔和音乐而不爱嘈吵的音乐。

Our school will soon hold another music concert. I am really looking forward to it.
我们学校快要举行一个音乐会，我真的急不及待它的到临。

还可以吗?若还是有难度，请尽管继续问。

Answer 2

字迹工整？！