Question

英语改错 求详细解释

On Thursday I will have to decide what I want myself to do over a weekend. I am thinking of making a trip to London, and visit the British Museum and some parks. But I have spent lot my money, so I cannot even go out of town. I may go to a film, or a concert. Yes, a concert can be very excited. You can watch your stars while enjoying your favorite music. So then, a concert cost so much. I may just listen to music, I have some records giving to me as birthday gifts. If I listen to my own records, there are no need to spend money. All right. That’s how I' m going to do.
一行：划掉myself ；a 改为the 第二行：visit 改为visiting 第三行：my前加of 第四行：excited 改为exciting 第五行：So改为But 第六行：cost改为costs；giving改为given 第七行：are改为is第八行：how改为what

Answer 1

1. want to do 就是自己想做什么，不加反身代词了
2. visiting 是跟making 并列，作为think of 的宾语
3. lot 不能单独使用，　lots　of, 或者a lot of
4. excited 指人感到兴奋，说事物、事情令人兴奋的特质，那么用exciting
5. 显然，前后两句语义转折，so 表示因果，而but转折
6.人家给我，也就是唱片是被给，given过去分词表示被动
7. there is no need, 主谓一致 单数need, 动词用　is
8. how 用来引导表示方式，单句中需要do 的宾语,所以用what

Answer 2

want to do sth 想要做某事
visiting是跟making并列的
lots of =a lot of 许多，大量，可以加可数名词和不可数名词
exciting是物令人兴奋的，是物的魅力 excited是人自己感觉兴奋的，是人自己的感觉
but 是转折so是表示因果
a concert是单数第三人称在动词cost 后加s
records是被给我，不是record自己给我，过去分词表被动
there is no need to。。。做什么什么没有必要，或没有意义
do缺少宾语，what可以做宾语而how不可以，how 只可以做状语