Question

写一篇80词左右的英语短文介绍你曾经旅游过的某个地方。着急啊啊啊啊，悬赏30

Answer 1

last summer i went to beijing for the holiday .i visited the great wall ,which was built thousand years ago ,so it is amazing .after that ,i went to the tianammen square ,and the weather there was good for us tovisit .this trip to beijing not only benefits me a lot .and makes happy .in a word ,i like this trip

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复制无爱。。

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谁复制的，我刚才写的

写一下就这么难吗

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可是主体是现在完成时啊，怪我没说清楚

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那改一下不就成了吗

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没学好。。

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那再写一下吧

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等下已经有人发了许多了你先不写了吧

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ok

Answer 2

Visiting the Great Wall
There is a famous saying,"He who doesn't reach the Great Wall is not a true man."this morning my classmates and I got up very early.
We went to the Great Wall by bus.
On our way to the Great Wall,we saw many tall buildings on each
sides of the road.
About two hours later, we arrived at Great Wall.when the Great Wall appeared in front of us ,we couldn't help crying,"what a wonderful sighe it is!How great it is!"when we walked on the Great Wall,we felt very proud because it's the longest wall in the world.Today it has become a place of interest to the people all over
the world.

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复制无爱。。

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哈哈

Answer 3

i have been to Hainan on holiday with my parents .We lived in a four star hotel for a night. Hainan has a sea and sand.

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太短了80词

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没写完

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现在还在写嘛

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额

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就问下。。

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恩

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主体是现在完成时哦

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什么是现在完成时?要加ing的吗

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have been/gone之类的

就等你啦

完了？

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没

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注意多用have+过去分词

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用的是was

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要求多一点have 毕竟初二最后全是have…

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my mother and i have been to shop. i have had something to eat and my mother has had some specie clothes. we felt tired but we have a happy holiday.

if you want go there you can by train or plan

最后是飞机

前面可以用have 改一下

Answer 4

满意回答
The Great Wall is a famous site of historic interest. It was built in Qin dynasty. At the beginning it was used as a military defense. Now it has become the symbol of China. It attracts numerous tourists from China and abroad. There is an old saying in China:" One who fails to reach the Great Wall is not a hero"

Answer 5

Last summer I went to Beijing with my family . First we went go the Great Wall because it is the pride of our Chinese and a wonder in the world. In the afternoon we went to the summer palace .We saw much beautiful senery there. The next morning we went to Tian'anmen square ,and we tasted Beijing duck.. In the afternoon we went to the bird's nest and the water cube.though we were tired we were very happy because we learned a lot from this trip.

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希望有个原创的，百度上的不想要。。

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要写长啊

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80词就够了

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我写完。你采纳了不白写

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现在完成时。。

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多久

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都行

你在写吗

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嗯

采纳了。？

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发了就采纳，保证

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I think West Lake is the most beautiful place I have ever been.

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已经有人发更多了。。

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他发完了。？

When I went to see at a glance the West Lake landscape, picturesque.

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马上就

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The artificial island, great lake,

那我还要发吗

In the mountains hidden hazy cave, cave, Ziyun cave singular hole king and tiger, Longjing, Yuquan, spring, stone peaks show, Linquan beautiful. Lake and Quyuanfenghe, Huagang Park, liulangwenying and other characteristics of the gardens, as well as the Lingyin Temple, the temple, and six towers, klippe and other places of historic interest and scenic beauty.

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算了，不发了吧，说实话他的相对好些

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好吧