Question

求解一篇高中英语短文改错

试卷上的题目，题注每处错误及其修改仅限一词;只允许修改十处。 Yesterday about 14:08,my beloved cousin Stanislaw passed by silently in a motorcycle accident. It`s really terrible,and it was quite hard to believe in it. My impression of him was what he was a very kind ,good and sunny boy .As most of us ,he had deadly love motorcycles .I haven ' t seen him for already about 25years ,it was my personal foult not keep a close contact with such a close reactive . I had heard from my reactives that the taxi driver probable had wanted to take responsibility .However,as an ex -cop ,he has many friends still work in the police ,who would prove the taxi driver innocent . 觉得很多地方都有问题，不止十处，也说不上确切的理由。求祥解，修改的地方都说一下原因，拜托拜托。付
foult 打错了，是fault

Answer 1

Yesterday about 14:08,my beloved cousin Stanislaw passed by(改为away) silently in a motorcycle accident. It`s really terrible,and it was quite hard to believe in (去掉in)it. My impression of him was what(改为that) he was a very kind ,good and sunny boy .As (改为Like) most of us ,he had deadly love（改为loved） motorcycles .I haven ' t （改为hadn't） seen him for already about 25years ,it was my personal foult not (加上to)keep a close contact with such a close reactive . I had(去掉had) heard from my reactives that the taxi driver probable(改为probably) had wanted to take responsibility .However,as an ex -cop ,he has many friends still work(改为working) in the police ,who would prove the taxi driver innocent .

Answer 2

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