Question

帮我看一下英语短文，是否正确，帮忙修改一下

My hometown
My hometown is a very beautiful place, this is a very quiet small place.
His name is hai feng! This is an ancient city, it retained many of the old things. There are many great men have come from here. Here, have a lot of characteristics snacks, also has many tourist destination. Here, although there is no big city, but the people here are very friendly. Here, you can spend a happy every day.
I love my hometown

我的家乡
我的家乡是一个非常非常漂亮的地方，这是一个安安静静的小地方。
他的名字叫海丰！这是一座古老的城市，它保留了很多古老的东西。有很多伟人也出自这里。这里，有很多特色的小吃，也有许许多多的旅游胜地。这里，虽然没有大城市的繁华，但是这里的人都很热情。这里，你可以开开心心的度过每一天。
我爱我的家乡

Answer 1

语法错误比较多。

• My hometown is a very beautiful place which is a very quiet and small town.

• Its name is hai feng, an ancient city that retained many historical things.

• Many great men have been born here. 

• In my hometown, there are a lot of special snacks and many tourist destinations.

•  Although it is not a big city, people here are very friendly.

• You can spend a happy life here every day.
  

追问

问一下‘关于我的家乡应该怎么翻译’？

追答

(concerning) about my hometown

Answer 2

My hometown
My hometown is very beautiful , It is a very quiet small place.
His name is hai feng! It is an ancient city that retained many of the old things. There are many great men who have come from here. Here, have a lot of characteristics snacks, also has many tourist destination. although it isn't a large city, but the people are very friendly. Come Here, you can spend every day happily.
I love my hometown

我也不会，见笑了。

Answer 3

第一句 两个place 重复 ,第二个改为city 名字不用在介绍家乡时出现 可以去掉
第二行 it retained 改为it retains
there are,,,,,,后面不能这样接可改为 the city brings the society a lot of talented people这个地方孕育了一堆人才 here, have 这个用法也不对 改成 there are assorted special and local delicacies,
and many a resort (=many resorts) there is no big city 改为 as not so big it is, people here,however, are far more friendly, where you can spend your days joyfully

Answer 4

My hometown
My hometown is a very beautiful place and also quiet.
Its name is hai feng! This ancient city not only remained many old things but also had several great men came from here. Here, we have lots of special local food as well as the scenery spots. Even though it is no big city, people are very friendly. most importantly, you can enjoy your life here every day.
I love my hometown

Answer 5

My hometown
My hometown is a very beautiful place,this is a very quiet and small place.Its name is Haifeng,it's an ancient city.It retains lots of old things.There were many great pepole here.There are also many special snacks,tourist destinations here.Although this is not a big city,the people here are very friendly,you can enjoy yourself everyday.I love my hometown.
英语没必要分那么多段，还有一些标志性的错误像although不能和but连用等等，对照看一下吧 希望能帮到你

Answer 6

有些地方有错误。hometown一般用it或her指代 there be句型用错（there be doing sth） here，have……不正确，建议改为there be句型