Question

【急】求英语高手帮忙修改一下我写的自我介绍,？

Answer 1

Good afternoon.
It's my great pleasure to have this opportunity to introduce myself to you here.
My name is ***.I would like to make my self-introduction with 3 initial letters from my name.
"S",it stands for study.I think learning is a feeling of satisfaction through which you can get some useful knowledge.My favorite subject is biology,because I think most interesting things about living things can be learned at the biology class.I also want to work in this field in the future.Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it,right?
Second,letter “W”,it means wonderful.Of course,my life is not only filled with study,but also with wonderful things too.After finishing my homework,I spend my free time listening to music,my favorite singer ) is Taylor Swift.When listening to music,I feel like I am floating in the music world.Don't you think it's wonderful?
The last one,"Y",Y is yes.I am a person who is easy-going and friendly others.So when someone turns to me,I always say "yes" to help him or her.I think it necessary for everyone to get along well with others.
I think it's very important I keep on learning and improving myself so that I can keep on making progress.
Thank you very much!
可以.,3,I think learning is a satisfy feeling which you can get some useful knowledge一句改为I think learning is a satisfied feeling ，which can
bring you passions of study.
And去掉
由于是你自己介绍，最好用主动语态，被动语态...,2,给点时间，我给你改改。
Good afternoon,my dear teachers.It's really a great pleasure to be here.My name is ***.Now
let me introduce myelf with 3 letters from my name.
Firstly,"S",it stands for stu...,1,。。。。满怀 *** 看到100分 ..改到一半 还是不要了吧 - - 建议你百度收个 会比较快 ，根据自己的需要稍微做些变动。你这里面语法错误比较多，还有就是自我介绍稍微偏口语化一点，不要可以的讲究用词。个人给你的建议呵呵。
下面的都不错 自己看结合下 ，根据口感 自己多读几遍 2分钟OK啦...,1,Good afternoon,honorable teachers and dear fellow students.
It's my great pleasure to introduce myself to all of you here.My name is ***.Now let me introduce myelf with 3 letters from my name.
,1,【急】求英语高手帮忙修改一下我写的自我介绍,
Good afternoon,my dear teachers.It's really a great pleasure for me to introduce myself to you here.My name is ***.Now let me introduce myelf with 3 letters which are from my name.
"S",it stands for study.I think learning is a satisfy feeling which you can get some useful knowledge.And my favorite subject is biology.Because most interesting things about living things I think in this class can be learned.Then I also want to work on it in the future.Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it ,right?
Second,the letter “W”,it's means wonderful.Of course,my life is not only filled with study,but wonderful things to do.After finishing my homework,I spend my free time listening to music,especially Taylor Swift's.When listening to music,I feel like I am floating up in the musical world.Do you think it's wonderful?
The last one "Y" is yes.I am a person who is easy-going to others.So when someone turn to me ,I 'll say "yes"tohelp him or her.And I also consider that it's necessary for everyone to get along well with others.
I think I still need to improve myself.That's all.Thanks.
还有 你们觉得这些能在2分钟内说完吗?