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The Worrying of the Growing Up
There always be lots of worrying during the process of our growing up. Now let us say something about these worrying.
First of all, we must face the more and more complicated interpersonal relationship. In our childhood, we could say what we want to say, but now we must be careful of our words, because it never can be retrived.. Maybe your words could destroy a kind of friendship. Then ,the pressure of studying must be faced. Now the social competition had become more and more intense, so we have to study harder and harder, and the mission of studying is becoming heavier and heavier. But in order to live comfortable in the future, we must study hard from now on. Last but not least, the peer pressure is a prominent role to us. We meet each other everyday, we are friends and classmates, but at the same time, we are also competitor, so we could not be too far or too close.
All in all, a lot of worrying would be come out during growing up, but we will not escape, and I believe we all will face them bravely.
译文：在成长过程中我们会遇到很多烦恼。现在就让我们说说这些烦恼吧。
首先，我们必须面对越来越复杂的人际关系。在我们小的时候，我们可以想说什么就说什么，但是现在我们必须小心我们的用词，因为说出的话收不回。一句话可以伤了一段友情。其次，学习的压力也是我们必须面对的。现在的社会竞争越来越激烈，我们不得不更加努力的学习，而学习的任务也越来越繁重了，但为了将来更好的生活，我们必须从现在起就努力学习。最后，同伴的压力也是至关重要的，我们和同伴每天都相见，我们是朋友，是同学，但同时也是竞争对手，所以我们不能走得太近，也不可离得太远。
总之，成长过程的烦恼总是会出现的，但我们不会逃避，我相信我们都会勇敢的面对它。
My Campus Life
This September I came into the senior middle school, and my senior middle school life was beginning. The life is different to the one in the junior middle school. Now, let me say something about my campus life.
First, in the senior middle school, study method is different. Now, I need to study by myself more often, teachers introduce the methods of solving problems, then we solve problem. Second, interpersonal relationship is different, most people is becoming more mature, so we must be deal with our relationship carefully. Last but not least, the mission of studying is heavier than before, so I have to spend a lot of time studying, even no time to make friends.
Above all, my campus life is different in the senior school, but it is more interesting.
译文：今年9月我进入了高中，开始了我的高中生涯。高中生活和初中生活是完全不同的，现在就让我来说一说我的高中校园生活。
首先，在高中的学习方法不同了，现在我更需要自己学习了，老师叫我们解题的思路，儿我们用这种思路去解题。其次，人际关系不同了，大部分人都已经变得成熟了，所以我们要更小心处理我们之间的关系。最后，学习的任务比以前重了，所以我不得不花大量的时间在学习上，甚至没有时间去交友。
总之，我的高中生活是不同了，但也更有趣了。
How to Lose Weight
It seems that many people today are overweight. No one wants to carry around extra pounds, lout few people know how to slum down effectively. They look for miracle pills and magic cures. In the end, they fail and the pounds come back. But the most effective way of losing weight is actually very simple. It is a combination of a good diet and proper exercise. What makes it work is determination. It requires discipline and commitment to succeed. Here is an example that proves the truth of these words.
My aunt had been trying to lose weight for years. She went on one diet after another, but none of them worked. She lost a lot of weight quickly only to have it come back. Finally, she followed her doctor's advice and began to eat a simple, well-balanced diet. She ate lots of fruits and vegetables and avoided high-fat foods. In addition, she joined an exercise class. She worked out three times a week. At first, my aunt wasn't happy because the weight came off so slowly. But her classmates encouraged her to stick to it and eventually she reached her goal. Best of all, she was able to stay at her ideal weight. That was because she had developed healthy new habits.
如何减肥
现在似乎有许多人的体重都过重。没有人会希望身上有多余的重量，但是很少人知道如何才能有效地瘦下来。他们会去寻找特效药，以及神奇的治疗法。最后不仅失败，而且反弹了。但是事实上，最有效的减肥方法非常简单。主要就是结合均衡的饮食，以及适当的运动。成功的关键就是要有决心。成功需要自制和投入。以下这个例子，可以证明这个方法是正确的。
我阿姨试图减肥已经好多年了。她一次又一次地节食，但是没有一次成功。她的体重会快速地下降，但没多久就又反弹了。最后，她听从医生的建议，开始吃简单、均衡的饮食。她吃大量的蔬果，并避免高脂肪的食物。除此之外，她还去参加运动课程。她一星期运动三次。起初，我阿姨并不是很开心，因为体重下降得很慢。但是她的同学们鼓励她坚持下去，最后她终于达到目标。最棒的是，她能够维持她的理想体重。因为她已经养成健康的新生活习惯。
There always be lots of worrying during the process of our growing up. Now let us say something about these worrying.
First of all, we must face the more and more complicated interpersonal relationship. In our childhood, we could say what we want to say, but now we must be careful of our words, because it never can be retrived.. Maybe your words could destroy a kind of friendship. Then ,the pressure of studying must be faced. Now the social competition had become more and more intense, so we have to study harder and harder, and the mission of studying is becoming heavier and heavier. But in order to live comfortable in the future, we must study hard from now on. Last but not least, the peer pressure is a prominent role to us. We meet each other everyday, we are friends and classmates, but at the same time, we are also competitor, so we could not be too far or too close.
All in all, a lot of worrying would be come out during growing up, but we will not escape, and I believe we all will face them bravely.
译文：在成长过程中我们会遇到很多烦恼。现在就让我们说说这些烦恼吧。
首先，我们必须面对越来越复杂的人际关系。在我们小的时候，我们可以想说什么就说什么，但是现在我们必须小心我们的用词，因为说出的话收不回。一句话可以伤了一段友情。其次，学习的压力也是我们必须面对的。现在的社会竞争越来越激烈，我们不得不更加努力的学习，而学习的任务也越来越繁重了，但为了将来更好的生活，我们必须从现在起就努力学习。最后，同伴的压力也是至关重要的，我们和同伴每天都相见，我们是朋友，是同学，但同时也是竞争对手，所以我们不能走得太近，也不可离得太远。
总之，成长过程的烦恼总是会出现的，但我们不会逃避，我相信我们都会勇敢的面对它。
My Campus Life
This September I came into the senior middle school, and my senior middle school life was beginning. The life is different to the one in the junior middle school. Now, let me say something about my campus life.
First, in the senior middle school, study method is different. Now, I need to study by myself more often, teachers introduce the methods of solving problems, then we solve problem. Second, interpersonal relationship is different, most people is becoming more mature, so we must be deal with our relationship carefully. Last but not least, the mission of studying is heavier than before, so I have to spend a lot of time studying, even no time to make friends.
Above all, my campus life is different in the senior school, but it is more interesting.
译文：今年9月我进入了高中，开始了我的高中生涯。高中生活和初中生活是完全不同的，现在就让我来说一说我的高中校园生活。
首先，在高中的学习方法不同了，现在我更需要自己学习了，老师叫我们解题的思路，儿我们用这种思路去解题。其次，人际关系不同了，大部分人都已经变得成熟了，所以我们要更小心处理我们之间的关系。最后，学习的任务比以前重了，所以我不得不花大量的时间在学习上，甚至没有时间去交友。
总之，我的高中生活是不同了，但也更有趣了。
How to Lose Weight
It seems that many people today are overweight. No one wants to carry around extra pounds, lout few people know how to slum down effectively. They look for miracle pills and magic cures. In the end, they fail and the pounds come back. But the most effective way of losing weight is actually very simple. It is a combination of a good diet and proper exercise. What makes it work is determination. It requires discipline and commitment to succeed. Here is an example that proves the truth of these words.
My aunt had been trying to lose weight for years. She went on one diet after another, but none of them worked. She lost a lot of weight quickly only to have it come back. Finally, she followed her doctor's advice and began to eat a simple, well-balanced diet. She ate lots of fruits and vegetables and avoided high-fat foods. In addition, she joined an exercise class. She worked out three times a week. At first, my aunt wasn't happy because the weight came off so slowly. But her classmates encouraged her to stick to it and eventually she reached her goal. Best of all, she was able to stay at her ideal weight. That was because she had developed healthy new habits.
如何减肥
现在似乎有许多人的体重都过重。没有人会希望身上有多余的重量，但是很少人知道如何才能有效地瘦下来。他们会去寻找特效药，以及神奇的治疗法。最后不仅失败，而且反弹了。但是事实上，最有效的减肥方法非常简单。主要就是结合均衡的饮食，以及适当的运动。成功的关键就是要有决心。成功需要自制和投入。以下这个例子，可以证明这个方法是正确的。
我阿姨试图减肥已经好多年了。她一次又一次地节食，但是没有一次成功。她的体重会快速地下降，但没多久就又反弹了。最后，她听从医生的建议，开始吃简单、均衡的饮食。她吃大量的蔬果，并避免高脂肪的食物。除此之外，她还去参加运动课程。她一星期运动三次。起初，我阿姨并不是很开心，因为体重下降得很慢。但是她的同学们鼓励她坚持下去，最后她终于达到目标。最棒的是，她能够维持她的理想体重。因为她已经养成健康的新生活习惯。
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有没有简单点，这都是高级语法
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我不太了解高一的语法啊，要不你把不合适的语法简单标一标，我看着改改
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