雅思作文题之典型错误(上)
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本文来自雅思作文网liuxue86.com《典型错误(上)》。 第一节 改错练习 对于大多数国内雅思考生而言,5-6分是比较容易取得的分数。但是有部分同学连续考两次雅思,作文均得5分。他们百思不得其解:他们掌握了写作的技巧,也有充分的论点论据,为什么6分这么难?其实他们的症结在于语言基础太不扎实,出现大量语言错误,通篇充斥着句子结构和用词错误,甚至于第一段就出现“低级”语言错误十几处,让考官目不忍睹。在过去六年里,笔者批改了培训学员的近十万篇习作,对考生常见问题进行了归纳整理,及时指出他们的错误,并从中英语言差异的角度,详细分析问题出现的深层次成因,从而达到治标兼治本的效果。
下面的改错练习,希望考生认真分析其错误之处并找出其成因,不要停留在改错的表层水平,应该挖掘其深层次的成因,以避免屡次犯同样的“低级”错误。
1. The invention of computers makes people live more comfortable and convenient.
__________________________________
2. Don’t put hand in pocket.
_______________ ___________________
3. Many traffic accidents occurred is the result of careless.
__________________________________
4. Last night was too cold.
__________________________________
5. By comparison, nuclear energy has some distinctive advantages, such as it is very clean and cheap.
__________________________________
6. Some people claim that fast food will instead of traditional food.
__________________________________
7. Despite he is very diligent at study, he stills cannot pass the IELTS test.
__________________________________
8. I finished homework and went out of dormitory for a drink.
__________________________________
9. Though the Internet has many benefits, but it also has some drawbacks.
__________________________________
10. If you are convenient, please give me a hand.
__________________________________
11. In the past, the price of milk was so expensive that few people could hardly afford it.
__________________________________
12. I forgot my watch at home.
__________________________________
13. Smoking is harmful to your body.
__________________________________
14. Under his help, we past the IELTS test.
__________________________________
15. The two types of designs exist difference.
__________________________________
16. The true fact is he never offers help to others.
__________________________________
17. There are many people plan to study abroad.
__________________________________
18. Keep pets are very popular among people live in big city.
__________________________________
19. If let alone at home, many old people are very dangerous.
__________________________________
20. The society should pay more attention to the problems of education, poverty and disease, however, they seldom do so.
__________________________________
21. Today is very hot, I stay home.
__________________________________
22. When talking to the interviewer, my heart was beating very fast.
__________________________________
23. He gave the rose to the lovely lady that he had bought for his wife.
__________________________________
24. Comparing with the performance of Linda, Kent’s performance is far from perfect.
25. The big noise makes me can’t sleep well.
__________________________________
26. My suggestion is more attention should be attached to the issue of youth drug abuse.
__________________________________
27. The price of milk is more expensive than rice.
__________________________________
28. The amount of bikes will decline in ten years.
__________________________________
29. Smoking is harmful to one’s body. On the one hand, it can cause lung cancer. On the other hand, it can increase the chances of having a miscarriage if a woman is pregnant.
__________________________________
30. The reason why people choose to live in cities is because the city life is more convenient and colorful.
__________________________________
31. People think develop space research will spend a huge number of money.
__________________________________
32. Now people go abroad becomes very easy.
__________________________________
33. Computer is a useful tool for student learn English.
__________________________________
34. Raising pets are good for old people and child.
__________________________________
35. Pet like dog and cat accompany them.
__________________________________
36. Keep pet in big city is not allowed.
__________________________________
37. There are many medical reports reveal that keeping pet can prevent heart disease and help patient to feel comfortably.
__________________________________
38. Discuss about/complain about/enter into the room/contact with/
__________________________________
__________________________________
40. It arises a public debate as to whether we humans should carry out experiments on animals.
__________________________________
41. Pursuit of fashion spends much money and waste much time.
__________________________________
42. However, others people suggest that college students do the part-time job is quite beneficial.
__________________________________
43. Young people live and study by themselves is of great significance to their future career.
__________________________________
44. On the whole, computer games have both advantages and disadvantages. But fairly speaking, everyone has to admit that it’s disadvantages far overweight it’s advantages.
__________________________________
45. I find myself difficult to work and study there due to my roommate’s inconsiderate behavior.
__________________________________
46. I am very difficult to write essays in English.
__________________________________
47. When one is over 70 years old, he is very dangerous if left alone at home.
__________________________________
48. I hope this letter would draw your attention and look into the case.
__________________________________
49. Last year saw a rapidly raise in the volume of output.
__________________________________
50. A small thief entered into my room and my room was stolen last night.
__________________________________
51. I would like a single room to live and study.
__________________________________
52. I am sorry for my abrupt departure that day, for I received a telephone that day asking me to return back home immediately.
53. I and my sister like pets very much. Therefore we strongly against the ban on pet-raising.
__________________________________
54. They maybe very busy so that they can not spare some time for their aged parents.
__________________________________
55. The curve rose upward sharply in the past few days.
__________________________________
56. After three days’ meeting, we drew a final conclusion that Tom is a dishonest man.
__________________________________
雅思写作频道我感谢您阅读《典型错误(上)》一文.
下面的改错练习,希望考生认真分析其错误之处并找出其成因,不要停留在改错的表层水平,应该挖掘其深层次的成因,以避免屡次犯同样的“低级”错误。
1. The invention of computers makes people live more comfortable and convenient.
__________________________________
2. Don’t put hand in pocket.
_______________ ___________________
3. Many traffic accidents occurred is the result of careless.
__________________________________
4. Last night was too cold.
__________________________________
5. By comparison, nuclear energy has some distinctive advantages, such as it is very clean and cheap.
__________________________________
6. Some people claim that fast food will instead of traditional food.
__________________________________
7. Despite he is very diligent at study, he stills cannot pass the IELTS test.
__________________________________
8. I finished homework and went out of dormitory for a drink.
__________________________________
9. Though the Internet has many benefits, but it also has some drawbacks.
__________________________________
10. If you are convenient, please give me a hand.
__________________________________
11. In the past, the price of milk was so expensive that few people could hardly afford it.
__________________________________
12. I forgot my watch at home.
__________________________________
13. Smoking is harmful to your body.
__________________________________
14. Under his help, we past the IELTS test.
__________________________________
15. The two types of designs exist difference.
__________________________________
16. The true fact is he never offers help to others.
__________________________________
17. There are many people plan to study abroad.
__________________________________
18. Keep pets are very popular among people live in big city.
__________________________________
19. If let alone at home, many old people are very dangerous.
__________________________________
20. The society should pay more attention to the problems of education, poverty and disease, however, they seldom do so.
__________________________________
21. Today is very hot, I stay home.
__________________________________
22. When talking to the interviewer, my heart was beating very fast.
__________________________________
23. He gave the rose to the lovely lady that he had bought for his wife.
__________________________________
24. Comparing with the performance of Linda, Kent’s performance is far from perfect.
25. The big noise makes me can’t sleep well.
__________________________________
26. My suggestion is more attention should be attached to the issue of youth drug abuse.
__________________________________
27. The price of milk is more expensive than rice.
__________________________________
28. The amount of bikes will decline in ten years.
__________________________________
29. Smoking is harmful to one’s body. On the one hand, it can cause lung cancer. On the other hand, it can increase the chances of having a miscarriage if a woman is pregnant.
__________________________________
30. The reason why people choose to live in cities is because the city life is more convenient and colorful.
__________________________________
31. People think develop space research will spend a huge number of money.
__________________________________
32. Now people go abroad becomes very easy.
__________________________________
33. Computer is a useful tool for student learn English.
__________________________________
34. Raising pets are good for old people and child.
__________________________________
35. Pet like dog and cat accompany them.
__________________________________
36. Keep pet in big city is not allowed.
__________________________________
37. There are many medical reports reveal that keeping pet can prevent heart disease and help patient to feel comfortably.
__________________________________
38. Discuss about/complain about/enter into the room/contact with/
__________________________________
__________________________________
40. It arises a public debate as to whether we humans should carry out experiments on animals.
__________________________________
41. Pursuit of fashion spends much money and waste much time.
__________________________________
42. However, others people suggest that college students do the part-time job is quite beneficial.
__________________________________
43. Young people live and study by themselves is of great significance to their future career.
__________________________________
44. On the whole, computer games have both advantages and disadvantages. But fairly speaking, everyone has to admit that it’s disadvantages far overweight it’s advantages.
__________________________________
45. I find myself difficult to work and study there due to my roommate’s inconsiderate behavior.
__________________________________
46. I am very difficult to write essays in English.
__________________________________
47. When one is over 70 years old, he is very dangerous if left alone at home.
__________________________________
48. I hope this letter would draw your attention and look into the case.
__________________________________
49. Last year saw a rapidly raise in the volume of output.
__________________________________
50. A small thief entered into my room and my room was stolen last night.
__________________________________
51. I would like a single room to live and study.
__________________________________
52. I am sorry for my abrupt departure that day, for I received a telephone that day asking me to return back home immediately.
53. I and my sister like pets very much. Therefore we strongly against the ban on pet-raising.
__________________________________
54. They maybe very busy so that they can not spare some time for their aged parents.
__________________________________
55. The curve rose upward sharply in the past few days.
__________________________________
56. After three days’ meeting, we drew a final conclusion that Tom is a dishonest man.
__________________________________
雅思写作频道我感谢您阅读《典型错误(上)》一文.
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