Question

纠正一下语法错误，急用！！！

Human nature is to create the miracle. Humans also can't leave the nature of the sanctuary. However, with the development of modern technology science, humans began to destroy nature and earth appear serious ecological problems.

Human nature has created that gave birth to the human. She is a human mother, she has been love to their children. She contains human wrong again and again. She hopes one day humans would realize his mistake, and try hard to recover. She understand human go on like this, all would be punished, so she tried to conceal the human crimes. At the same time she also waiting for human awakening day.

Humans don't know his mother pain and wait. Just want to how to seek interests from mother there. A large number of human mining coal, oil, natural gas, of which many are left as the mine, this not only destroy the original appearance, but also let mother lost health. In addition, the human also destroyed vegetation. Because the human cut casually, make trees to reduce a lot of. Forest area reducing, this makes all kinds of wild animals on the verge of extinction, various kinds of wild animals disappeared. Also because of the destruction of human, make the desert is more and more, more and more frequent sandstorms. So many of our forestation, make the sandstorm to obtain the very good control.

Human blind to use all kinds of natural resources. Human blind make natural change. More over it is not only the human can't handle their garbage hiding in the mother. Industrial waste water into the river, the source of the life were destroyed, our children how to do?
Let people to protect nature, love the common home of human beings and. Let us can see a pure and fresh and green, a vigor of the world!

Answer 1

第一段的错误：
“Human nature is to create the miracle.”

改为“The creation of the human race is a miracle made by nature.”

"modern technology science"
technology 和 science 互换位置

“earth appear serious ecological problems”

改为“serious ecological problems start to appear on Earth”

第二段我直接给你重写一遍。=.=

Mother Nature has given birth to the human kind. She has always been loving and forgiving to their children. She hopes that one day, humans will realize their mistake and try hard to redempt. She understands that if man goes on like this, all will be punished, so she tries to conceal the crimes committed by man. At the same time she also waits for the day when man understands the importance of protecting nature.

呃……剩下的…………

Answer 2

　　Human being don't know that their mother pains and waits. They just want to seek interests from thier mother. A large number of human mined coal, oil and natural gas, of which much was left as the mine. This not only destroys the original appearance, but also makes mother unhealthy. In addition, human being also destroyed vegetation because they cut down trees casually, making the amount of trees reduce a lot. The surface area of forests is reducng as well, and this makes all kinds of wild animals extinct. Also because of the destruction of human being, the deserts become more and more, along with more and more frequent sandstorms. So much of our forestation, make the sandstorm obtain the very good control.
　　Human being blindly use all kinds of natural resources and make natural change. More over, it is human being who cannot handle their garbage hiding in the mother's body. Industrial waste water are poured into rivers which are the source of the life being destroyed. How could our children do?
　　Protect the nature and love the common home of human beings. Let us be able to see a pure, fresh, green and vigorous world!