Question

关于买东西的英语作文，我买了一个相机坏了去找售后要求退款一类的，作文不要对话形式，急急急，在线等！

不用很复杂，简单点的初中水平就行
今晚就要啊！！！！！！！很急

Answer 1

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to request for a full refund of the camera-Canon650D I phurchased on Nov 12, 2012 from the XX District Branch Store. (交待写信目的，购买的商品型号，时间，地点)The camera was great when you showed to me in your store, but the one I received was scratched on the lens with a broken shouler strap. What's worst, the camera cannot work as the screen is blur and blue. Besides, the extra battery You shop promised free is not inside the package. (点明退货原因,镜头刮花，肩带破损，屏幕蓝点)

I really like your great service in the store, but the goods is a little lower than my expectation. (先给糖后打一棒子，英语公关类书写中也有委婉语这一要求）You have mentioned a 7-day validity for exchanging or refund unqulified quality, so I would appreciate it if You Store could offer me a refund.（再一次理直气壮点明原因）

I am looking forward to your prompt reply.

Thanks!

Yours Sincerely,
XX

英语公关文写作目的在于沟通，最和谐的方式达到自己的要求。切忌言辞粗暴，语气不善，这道理跟在中国你跟人要求某事一样，你若一味说人不好，对方也不会如你所愿。作为参考咯